I asked you to write about rural revitalization, but you actually wrote this?
Chapter 6: Gao 7 Gun wants to kill Shen Shuting, Boss Yang is angry
Chapter 6 Gao Qiqiang wants to kill Shen Shuting, Boss Yang is angry
It's actually not as difficult as you think to make the audience complain frequently and be reluctant to abandon the show.
The first thing is to let them pretend to be themselves or an acquaintance around them.
If this is in place, they will have the desire to pursue it.
Another point that is easily overlooked is the clever use of certain words.
Use the tension of words to arouse their emotions.
Whether you hate iron for not becoming steel, or you feel the same way.
As long as the emotions are evoked by these limited words, the script will be sticky.
The difficulty is just to grasp a scale.
The audience's dopamine cannot be continuously secreted, and the subsequent endorphin secretion will be weak.
Otherwise, once the audience becomes emotionally fatigued or disgusted, all previous efforts will be in vain.
Lin Xiao's pause was just right.
Because... people are dead!
There is no doubt that a huge emotional siphon will follow.
According to common sense, Gao Qiqiang would definitely surrender to the police in order to clear himself.
As long as he can prove that he has nothing to do with this short-lived passerby and has no motive for murder and cooperates with the investigation, there will be no flaws.
At worst, if my brother doesn't open a shop, he will continue to sell fish.
But the life of a little person is not like this.
It was this incident that tore a crack in his originally ordinary career of selling fish, leading him to a stage where glory and darkness coexist.
……
Lin Xiao opened another bottle of Coke.
Gudong Gudong took a few mouthfuls.
Casually, two explosive little climax plots are thrown out.
One is that Gao Qiqiang did not surrender.
The other is his younger brother Gao Qisheng, who, in order to build relationships, caused drunken and passionate murders.
The four judges and Sister Jin were collectively petrified.
Sister Jin blinked hard.
"Teachers, why didn't Gao Qiqiang call the police or confess?"
"His younger brother also kills people. What kind of business did the Gao brothers create? Isn't this going from light to darkness? I would rather they sell fish!"
Sister Jin knows nothing about screenwriting.
But seeing this, I started to panic.
It's not easy for a little person to get ahead, but murder is illegal!
Yang Mi bit her moist lips.
Following the rhythm of Lin Xiao's fingers, he read a line of narration on the big screen.
"How difficult it is for ordinary people to break through the blockade of class. Gao Qiqiang and Gao Qisheng have the answer in their hearts."
"Their peaceful lives have undergone an unparalleled change because of the blood on their hands, intentionally or unintentionally."
"And this is the beginning of their journey into the abyss!"
Haiyan breathed a long sigh of relief and said: "This plot happened so suddenly that I almost thought it was a bad drama. I even got goosebumps!"
Wuershan sighed: "In just a few hundred words, I can arrange the characters' experiences and images in a smooth and ups and downs. To be honest, I can't even do it!"
Yu Zheng snorted from his nostrils, his tone very dissatisfied.
"What we want is a positive energy drama. This is a perfect villain. Two teachers, he has already violated the rules!"
Yang Mi's eyes flashed.
"Teacher Yu, you wouldn't go straight into the plot without establishing the character, and just leave it to that point, right?"
Yu Zheng didn't understand the meaning of this.
When I looked at Lin Xiao's big screen, I almost choked.
"The character card is created, now let's enter the plot?"
"No, No. 57, he, is he sick?"
After working on it for a long time, Lin Xiao wrote a character summary.
He was excited for a long time, thinking that by grasping the handle early, he could eliminate this annoying guy!
Netizens in the live broadcast room, after experiencing emotional ups and downs, saw this conclusion and sent out comments one after another.
"I won't say whether No. 57 understands screenwriting, but I'm sure he knows how to manipulate people's hearts!"
"What the hell, I don't even know what to say!" "I don't care about Lin Xiao, I just want to know how Gao Qiqiang breaks the game!"
"His brother killed someone, and he killed his relatives out of justice, that's for sure!"
"Gao Qiqiang left a fingerprint on the button of the electrical box. This hook is really disturbing!"
"Am I out of my mind? I don't want the police to find Gao Qiqiang at all."
"Cao Wenwu insulted Gao Qisheng like that. That's bullying. He deserves to die!"
"To be honest, Gao Qisheng's experience is too real. Back then, I was pushed to the ground and licked my shoes by someone like Cao Wenwu, but I didn't have the courage to throw bricks. Now I'm reduced to carrying bricks."
"Although these two brothers are not good people, I can't hate them!"
"To put it bluntly, we are all Gao Qiqiang and Gao Qisheng, but we have all become dogs in order to live."
"Just for this plot, I won't blame these two brothers for whatever they do next!"
"There is obviously a murder case, why am I so sad for the Gao brothers?"
"They are not going dark, they are fighting against fate!"
"I admit, I have double standards, what the hell!"
"I have to say that the black and white character settings are the most fake ones. The era of only using dichotomies to judge people has passed."
"Lin Xiao, please write quickly. Emma went to the toilet again. Is she suffering from kidney deficiency?"
Lin Xiao clicked and stopped.
I did not continue to waste ink on the turning point in the fate of the two brothers Gao Qiqiang and Gao Qisheng.
Instead, directly write that Gao Qiqian got the clues the police needed.
This made netizens affirm Gao Qiqiang's ability.
"The high seven guns are awesome!"
The content of the barrage was so bizarre that the judges were all dumbfounded.
Yu Zheng was the first to press the elimination button and protested.
"What's going on? This male protagonist is obviously going to be a black man, and his views are not correct!"
"Boss Yang, you can't just follow your five senses. There are two big guys. This kind of script is rubbish. It obviously does not comply with the competition rules!"
"I suggest that No. 57 be eliminated!"
Sister Jin also noticed the direction of public opinion.
He quickly called his assistant and asked her to go backstage to ask about the situation.
After a while, the assistant came back and said in her ear: "The risk control team said there is no problem with No. 57."
Sister Jin nodded and looked at the three judges to ask for their opinions.
Wuershan was straightforward: "I don't see anything wrong with the plot of No. 57, and I don't agree with it!"
Yang Mi said: "Teacher Yu, you are interested in the palace drama No. 3. You can talk to her privately about cooperation. Why do you have to use No. 57 to make fun of you?"
"Besides, it's only been half an hour, and the plot hasn't fully unfolded yet."
"I don't agree to eliminate No. 57!"
Yu Zheng's little calculation was revealed by Yang Mi, and he couldn't keep it off his face.
"Boss Yang, I don't mean that. The premise of fair competition is that the creative content is legal and compliant. No. 57 has obviously made a serious and low-level mistake."
Sister Jin doesn't like Yu Zheng.
But she must stand up to defend the fairness of the competition.
I had to ask the last judge who had not yet expressed his opinion.
"Ebi, look at the plot of No. 57, is there any possibility of redemption?"
The pressure is on Haiyan.
Haiyan laughed dumbly and said meaningfully.
"To be honest, among the 95 little people currently competing, No. 57 Gao Qiqiang is the most interesting. I can already feel the energy of this character."
The answer is obvious.
Without the prompt from the risk control team and the joint elimination decision of the four judges, Yu Zheng's proposal was rejected.
However, within just a few minutes of discussion, Lin Xiao's plot took another turn.
Yang Mi was stunned and stunned.
"Why is Gao Qiqiang dealing with the underworld? Why did he agree to kill the key witness Shen Shuting? Is he crazy?"
(End of this chapter)
It's actually not as difficult as you think to make the audience complain frequently and be reluctant to abandon the show.
The first thing is to let them pretend to be themselves or an acquaintance around them.
If this is in place, they will have the desire to pursue it.
Another point that is easily overlooked is the clever use of certain words.
Use the tension of words to arouse their emotions.
Whether you hate iron for not becoming steel, or you feel the same way.
As long as the emotions are evoked by these limited words, the script will be sticky.
The difficulty is just to grasp a scale.
The audience's dopamine cannot be continuously secreted, and the subsequent endorphin secretion will be weak.
Otherwise, once the audience becomes emotionally fatigued or disgusted, all previous efforts will be in vain.
Lin Xiao's pause was just right.
Because... people are dead!
There is no doubt that a huge emotional siphon will follow.
According to common sense, Gao Qiqiang would definitely surrender to the police in order to clear himself.
As long as he can prove that he has nothing to do with this short-lived passerby and has no motive for murder and cooperates with the investigation, there will be no flaws.
At worst, if my brother doesn't open a shop, he will continue to sell fish.
But the life of a little person is not like this.
It was this incident that tore a crack in his originally ordinary career of selling fish, leading him to a stage where glory and darkness coexist.
……
Lin Xiao opened another bottle of Coke.
Gudong Gudong took a few mouthfuls.
Casually, two explosive little climax plots are thrown out.
One is that Gao Qiqiang did not surrender.
The other is his younger brother Gao Qisheng, who, in order to build relationships, caused drunken and passionate murders.
The four judges and Sister Jin were collectively petrified.
Sister Jin blinked hard.
"Teachers, why didn't Gao Qiqiang call the police or confess?"
"His younger brother also kills people. What kind of business did the Gao brothers create? Isn't this going from light to darkness? I would rather they sell fish!"
Sister Jin knows nothing about screenwriting.
But seeing this, I started to panic.
It's not easy for a little person to get ahead, but murder is illegal!
Yang Mi bit her moist lips.
Following the rhythm of Lin Xiao's fingers, he read a line of narration on the big screen.
"How difficult it is for ordinary people to break through the blockade of class. Gao Qiqiang and Gao Qisheng have the answer in their hearts."
"Their peaceful lives have undergone an unparalleled change because of the blood on their hands, intentionally or unintentionally."
"And this is the beginning of their journey into the abyss!"
Haiyan breathed a long sigh of relief and said: "This plot happened so suddenly that I almost thought it was a bad drama. I even got goosebumps!"
Wuershan sighed: "In just a few hundred words, I can arrange the characters' experiences and images in a smooth and ups and downs. To be honest, I can't even do it!"
Yu Zheng snorted from his nostrils, his tone very dissatisfied.
"What we want is a positive energy drama. This is a perfect villain. Two teachers, he has already violated the rules!"
Yang Mi's eyes flashed.
"Teacher Yu, you wouldn't go straight into the plot without establishing the character, and just leave it to that point, right?"
Yu Zheng didn't understand the meaning of this.
When I looked at Lin Xiao's big screen, I almost choked.
"The character card is created, now let's enter the plot?"
"No, No. 57, he, is he sick?"
After working on it for a long time, Lin Xiao wrote a character summary.
He was excited for a long time, thinking that by grasping the handle early, he could eliminate this annoying guy!
Netizens in the live broadcast room, after experiencing emotional ups and downs, saw this conclusion and sent out comments one after another.
"I won't say whether No. 57 understands screenwriting, but I'm sure he knows how to manipulate people's hearts!"
"What the hell, I don't even know what to say!" "I don't care about Lin Xiao, I just want to know how Gao Qiqiang breaks the game!"
"His brother killed someone, and he killed his relatives out of justice, that's for sure!"
"Gao Qiqiang left a fingerprint on the button of the electrical box. This hook is really disturbing!"
"Am I out of my mind? I don't want the police to find Gao Qiqiang at all."
"Cao Wenwu insulted Gao Qisheng like that. That's bullying. He deserves to die!"
"To be honest, Gao Qisheng's experience is too real. Back then, I was pushed to the ground and licked my shoes by someone like Cao Wenwu, but I didn't have the courage to throw bricks. Now I'm reduced to carrying bricks."
"Although these two brothers are not good people, I can't hate them!"
"To put it bluntly, we are all Gao Qiqiang and Gao Qisheng, but we have all become dogs in order to live."
"Just for this plot, I won't blame these two brothers for whatever they do next!"
"There is obviously a murder case, why am I so sad for the Gao brothers?"
"They are not going dark, they are fighting against fate!"
"I admit, I have double standards, what the hell!"
"I have to say that the black and white character settings are the most fake ones. The era of only using dichotomies to judge people has passed."
"Lin Xiao, please write quickly. Emma went to the toilet again. Is she suffering from kidney deficiency?"
Lin Xiao clicked and stopped.
I did not continue to waste ink on the turning point in the fate of the two brothers Gao Qiqiang and Gao Qisheng.
Instead, directly write that Gao Qiqian got the clues the police needed.
This made netizens affirm Gao Qiqiang's ability.
"The high seven guns are awesome!"
The content of the barrage was so bizarre that the judges were all dumbfounded.
Yu Zheng was the first to press the elimination button and protested.
"What's going on? This male protagonist is obviously going to be a black man, and his views are not correct!"
"Boss Yang, you can't just follow your five senses. There are two big guys. This kind of script is rubbish. It obviously does not comply with the competition rules!"
"I suggest that No. 57 be eliminated!"
Sister Jin also noticed the direction of public opinion.
He quickly called his assistant and asked her to go backstage to ask about the situation.
After a while, the assistant came back and said in her ear: "The risk control team said there is no problem with No. 57."
Sister Jin nodded and looked at the three judges to ask for their opinions.
Wuershan was straightforward: "I don't see anything wrong with the plot of No. 57, and I don't agree with it!"
Yang Mi said: "Teacher Yu, you are interested in the palace drama No. 3. You can talk to her privately about cooperation. Why do you have to use No. 57 to make fun of you?"
"Besides, it's only been half an hour, and the plot hasn't fully unfolded yet."
"I don't agree to eliminate No. 57!"
Yu Zheng's little calculation was revealed by Yang Mi, and he couldn't keep it off his face.
"Boss Yang, I don't mean that. The premise of fair competition is that the creative content is legal and compliant. No. 57 has obviously made a serious and low-level mistake."
Sister Jin doesn't like Yu Zheng.
But she must stand up to defend the fairness of the competition.
I had to ask the last judge who had not yet expressed his opinion.
"Ebi, look at the plot of No. 57, is there any possibility of redemption?"
The pressure is on Haiyan.
Haiyan laughed dumbly and said meaningfully.
"To be honest, among the 95 little people currently competing, No. 57 Gao Qiqiang is the most interesting. I can already feel the energy of this character."
The answer is obvious.
Without the prompt from the risk control team and the joint elimination decision of the four judges, Yu Zheng's proposal was rejected.
However, within just a few minutes of discussion, Lin Xiao's plot took another turn.
Yang Mi was stunned and stunned.
"Why is Gao Qiqiang dealing with the underworld? Why did he agree to kill the key witness Shen Shuting? Is he crazy?"
(End of this chapter)
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