I asked you to write about rural revitalization, but you actually wrote this?

Chapter 5: I went against the grain and the judges’ silence was deafening

Yang Mi originally watched it with gusto.

Hearing their discussion, there was a hint of disappointment on his face.

To be honest.

When she first saw Lin Xiao, she was indeed attracted to him.

Unlike other contestants who are eager to try.

Under Lin Xiao's slightly melancholic temperament, there is an inexplicable wisdom and calmness.

It seems that there is an uneasy but stubborn soul locked in that tall body.

She has played countless roles, and it is common for her to figure out the characters' emotions.

I think I can't be wrong.

At this time, he had to re-examine Lin Xiao.

While staring at the screen, he said quietly: "The male protagonist had a gray childhood. His father was domestically violent, which caused his mother to have a car accident."

"The male protagonist uses his pension money to rent and sell fish stalls for his younger brothers and sisters to study. He has no power and power. Facing these ruffian Tang brothers, he has no choice but to show weakness. There is no problem."

Wuershan nodded: "Indeed, the beginning of this paragraph has a strong sense of immersion. Such characters are too common around us."

"The police's handling is also understandable. Regardless of whether you are the one being bullied, as long as you fight back when you are being beaten, it will be classified as a mutual assault. It makes sense that each of you will be beaten fifty times."

"but……"

Haiyan took over the conversation and spoke in a long voice.

"Gao Qiqiang always made mistakes and used these two policemen as his backers to fool those gangsters. This shows that he is a bold and careful person, and his personality can be considered established."

"But...the problem is, he is short of money and can expand the market and make the fish stall bigger, so why should he bother others?"

"The success of a small character script lies in the fact that the characters are accurate, but too complex characters are tantamount to tying yourself up and are not conducive to the development of subsequent plots."

Yu Zheng's eyes lit up, and he finally found a sense of identity in the two bosses.

He slapped the table and said, "Look, I just said No. 57 won't work, right?"

"If he continues to make it up like this, investors won't invest a cent!"

Then, he proudly turned his head and dissed Yang Mi.

"Boss Yang, you still need to practice your accuracy in reading people for a few more years."

"Learn from me. Back then, I said you had the appearance of a top-notch superstar. How about it? I was right, right?"

Sister Jin couldn't bear it any longer and rolled her eyes mercilessly.

"Teacher Yu, when Damimi refused to sign a contract with the company, you publicly called her ungrateful. The Internet has memory!"

Although Haiyan and Wuershan are in the circle.

But few care about these scandals.

After hearing what Sister Jin said, she looked at Yang Mi and Yu Zheng in surprise, her eyes darting back and forth between them.

Yu Zheng blushed.

He touched his nose and explained to himself: "I didn't say that on purpose just to motivate her!"

Yang Mi knew that Sister Jin was protecting her, so she smiled gratefully at her and said that she had long forgotten it.

……

Lin Xiao's side.

Fingers clicked on the keyboard.

The reminders in my mind were like chicken blood, they kept dinging.

【Points +10】

【Points +50】

[Point, point, point, point...]

In such a short time, it has accumulated to more than 5000.

Moreover, this value is still soaring rapidly.

"Good guy, I haven't reached the first turning point yet, are there so many flaws?"

Lin Xiao secretly cursed.

The nerves started to get a little tense.

If this continues, he won't be kicked out of the race midway, right?

But without these foreshadowings, Gao Qiqiang would not have been dragged into the quagmire.

The following plot is difficult to enjoy.

No matter what, the most important thing is to control your own pace.

Netizens in the live broadcast room went crazy.

"Damn it, is this No. 57 seriously ill?" "I think he is seriously ill. After the little guy was beaten, he shouldn't have moved out of the market quickly. Why is he still fighting against others!"

"A dog relies on human strength, this word is used well!"

"Officers An and Li just see him as honest and feel sorry for him. Does he really think he is an informant?"

"It's just that An Xin and him are not the same people at all, and he even came to find someone's house because of those gangsters!"

"Li Xiang is serious. If you are looking for someone to inquire about something, why are you looking for Gao Qiqiang!"

"This No. 57, is it intentional? Look at his popularity, he is already in the top ten!"

"This time it requires online voting and judges' scores. It is useless to be popular. The judges will not like it and you will definitely be eliminated!"

"The comment section pissed me off. I am the third generation of Yu, and I know these experiences best. You move just when you want? Are you going to pay the liquidated damages?"

"That's right, we ruffians also work according to the contract. You can leave, but you have to pay enough!"

"No, these two people upstairs, do they feel so real?"

"No. 57 jumped repeatedly on the edge of the contact line, seeking death at any time!"

"Hmph, nothing he writes is outrageous. That jerk almost scared me to death before, but this time he wants to piss me off again!"

Netizens don’t know.

The harder they scold, the higher the points in the god-level screenwriter system will be.

The higher your points, the more shocking the scripts you unlock.

If Lin Xiao successfully advances to the top 32 this time, their little hearts will be tortured even more severely in subsequent games!

Lin Xiao had no sympathy for them at all.

Fingers are getting faster and faster.

Soon, the plot came to that period of time that even Gao Qiqiang himself felt unbearable to look back on.

"My younger brother Gao Qisheng has graduated and is optimistic about the promising PHS business, but he needs a large amount of start-up capital, so..."

Yang Mi's lonely expression suddenly changed.

"The plot of No. 57 has reached a turning point..."

Yu Zheng immediately mocked: "Come on, if you stretch your hips in front, no matter how exciting it is in the back, it will be in vain."

"No. 57 doesn't know how to grasp the rhythm of the show. He blindly abuses the male protagonist, sets up obstacles, and makes people angry. This is undoubtedly a poisonous point."

He would not say that he suppressed Lin Xiao because he was satisfied with No. 3's script.

Wuershan stared at the screen and frowned.

The performance of this group was not very outstanding.

On the 3rd, the heroine was killing people in the harem.

On the 18th, the male protagonist went undercover, and his heart was filled with tears.

In comparison, Lin Xiao's fish seller is quite impressive.

Just say nothing at this time and listen to the discussion of the other three.

Haiyan ignored Yu Zheng and turned his head slightly to give Yang Mi an approving look.

"Boss Yang, you can do it! If you see something, please tell me."

Yang Mi followed her own train of thought.

Next, Gao Qiqiang can take out a loan to raise funds for his brother, and then the brothers will work hard in their respective industries...

Gah!
For a moment, her words stopped abruptly.

The silence among the five people at the judges' table was deafening!
Haiyan said angrily: "Damn it, Gao Qiqian took over the job of beating people, and he also killed someone?"

Wuershan gasped: "Involved in a murder case? How much money does this make!"

Yu Zheng laughed heartily: "A fish seller really thinks he is a black guild, working as a thug for tens of thousands of dollars, he is really dead, I am laughing so hard!"

The points in Lin Xiao's system exceeded [-] before his eyes.

At this moment, the endurance of netizens and screenwriters is almost over the limit.

After typing the last word, he stopped.

Because he is very clear.

The feeling of reading a script live is different from reading a complete script.

Because at the scene, no one knew the ending.

This also happened to give Lin Xiao the opportunity to fully control the rhythm.

The accumulation of shortcomings is no longer a problem for him to worry about.

Next, what he needs to show is the field control ability that a god-level screenwriter should have!

(End of this chapter)