I asked you to write about rural revitalization, but you actually wrote this?

Chapter 52: Classic provocative words: What a pity, you are not nearly as strong

The two quarreled with each other, but finally settled the matter.

On Lin Xiao's side, Apan's plot is reaching a plateau.

And Anna gradually enters the audience's field of vision.

"According to the character, Anna was also deceived. How pitiful!"

"But women are treated really well. At least they don't have to be beaten like Apan and the others."

"What a beautiful thought. Can you write directly about the kind of beatings a woman receives? As soon as Apan and the others entered the park, they heard a woman shouting."

"So, the women who come here will not be..."

"No wonder a female classmate of mine went abroad for a few months and went crazy when she came back. I feel so sorry for her!"

"Why do such gangs exist? Wouldn't everyone please be peaceful and live a good life?"

"Ugh, who knows? I'm almost like Anna, I don't dare call the police!"

"Lin Xiao is already collecting and writing, otherwise we may not have a chance to see the subsequent plot."

Lin Xiao felt numb to the system prompts.

80 complaints points!
Who would have thought that this script has more flaws than "Kang Biao"!

"With Apan's technical support, Anna's performance has skyrocketed."

"The treatment of both of them has improved, but Apan has not given up the idea of ​​​​escape from Canaan, but Anna persuaded him to stay."

"Apan, I have lived in hell before, but I think there is more hope here. If I can make 100 million today, I can make 500 million another day!"

"When I complete my performance, I will take the bonus and choose a city I like to settle in. Oh, by the way, I will definitely remember to call the police and let the police come to rescue you."

"Apan's inner guilt cannot be described in words. What is behind Anna's so-called achievements? It is very likely that it is a person's collapse and a family's disaster!"

"The two of us standing under the stars in Canaan, imagining the future, would never have thought that A Tian's life would become a mess at this time!"

"My girlfriend Xiaoyu even went to report the crime behind his back and told the police all about A Tian. The police also determined that A Tian had indeed been defrauded, but they can't help him recover it now!"

"Xiao Yu returned to school and slowly healed while playing the cello. Little did he know, A Tian got into trouble again!"

"The loan sharks found him and forced him to pay back the money, but he spent all his money on online gambling. Those people dragged him to sell his blood. Only then did his parents learn that their son was on such a path of no return!"

"Fortunately, the old couple had some money and spent all their savings to help him plug the hole. They ruthlessly confiscated his mobile phone and locked him in the house."

"However, he still broke the door and secretly got the mobile phone."

"On the Canaan side, Ah Cai also forced Ah Pan to continue taking action."

"Anna was taken by Manager Lu and her performance was good. Her situation is completely different from when she was in Daxia."

"At that time, his boss deceived her into signing the contract, and used the overbearing clause to make her bear huge debts. He originally wanted to seek comfort, but when he returned home, his terminally ill mother actually set up a gambling game at home."

"Now Anna is grateful to her best friends and Ah Cai from the bottom of her heart. If they hadn't found such a job for her, I might have had to make that kind of mini-movie to pay off her debt."

"So, she kept urging Ah Pan in private. Ah Pan had no choice but to send a message back to Ah Tian under Ah Cai's watchful eyes."

"Ah Cai: Tell him, just say it's unstable, so I won't do it!"

"Apan was overjoyed, thinking that A Tian, ​​who was opposite him, could escape. Unexpectedly, A Cai's next words almost made him collapse."

"Ah Cai: Tell him to switch to Kotcoin, but the threshold is higher. The minimum investment is 800 million. You may not have the strength."

"Manager Lu: If you send him a voice message, your voice should be loud!"

As he wrote this, Lin Xiao took a sip of Coke.

It was during this pause that netizens fell into madness again.

"So, A Tian was tricked by A Pan and Anna?"

"Ah Tian, ​​you idiot, please listen to your mother and stop looking at your phone!"

"Liar, the person you are chatting with is a professional liar. Ah Tian, ​​please wake up!"

"I'm cold all over now. I'm really scared." "All three of them are victims. If you want to blame it, it's Ah Cai, Manager Lu, and those Canaan police officers who provide shelter to the fraud gang!"

"Wow, I feel so nervous and sad to see you."

"The palms and backs of the hands are full of flesh. It's not easy for A Pan and Anna, but they know what they are doing, and A Tian doesn't know anything!"

"The last time I shouted stop in the live broadcast room was when Gao Qi shot Hongyan."

"Lin Xiao is the most popular, beating No. 2 by a huge margin!"

Finally, there were sighs of approval from the judges' table.

Haiyan: "This plot is okay!"

Urshan: "Indeed, even if it is not a dark horse at the box office, the results will not be much worse!"

Yu Zheng felt a little uncomfortable. This script did have potential.

But that's not his cup of tea.

The last time there were thousands of troops sharing the cake, he was squeezed out.

This time he wanted to secretly let others try to get a share of the pie for him.

Secretly sent a message to a friend.

"Script No. 57 in the screenwriting competition may be in theaters. Please inquire about it and grab a role as soon as possible."

After posting, he pretended not to be interested and complained: "This drama has no connotation and is written too casually. I don't like it."

Sister Jin sees through it but doesn’t tell it.

There was a hint of speculation in the smile.

At this moment, in the live broadcast room, the barrage started rolling.

Lin Xiao wrote: "A Tian rummaged through the drawers and wardrobe at home, slumped on the ground in disappointment, and suddenly thought of a sum of money."

"Property!"

"That was a wedding house that his parents bought for him in the city center when he was in school. Now it has exceeded 1000 million."

Everyone gasped.

"Hiss... top student, master's degree, can't he be really confused?"

"Didn't my girlfriend report the crime? Why didn't A Tian move in? Online gambling is also illegal!"

"Hey, that girlfriend, why are you mentioning her? If she hadn't made the bet, A Tian would have turned over long ago."

"I think what A Tian can't let go of is Anna. Anna has been with him for so many days. How could she stop talking if he just wants to?"

"Since ancient times, wealth and lust have been harmful to people, but A Tian is young after all!"

"It's so scary. I automatically put myself into A Tian's perspective. In fact, I trust Anna very much. How could such a gentle young lady harm me?"

"Xiaoyu is his girlfriend who has been dating since college. How many years of relationship is not as good as one who has been dating for a few days?"

"What's the problem? Love doesn't come first!"

"Love brain, get out of here!"

"Man, hehe, he is so lustful and deserves to be deceived!"

"Auntie upstairs, you are a woman like Xiao Yu who specializes in doing bad things and doing good things, right?"

"Xiaoyu: A blessed girl will never enter the door of unlucky people!"

"Everyone discusses whether the script is good or not, and then creates a conflict between men and women!"

"This is an anti-fraud script, guys, who on earth thought it was a romance movie!"

(End of this chapter)