Become the city lord from today
Chapter 1000
"pitter patter......"
Chang'an City was shrouded in drizzle, but there was still an endless stream of people on the streets, all holding umbrellas and going out.
In the castle, Nicole put Liu Feng into imperial clothes and came up after sending them to the bottom of the castle.
Today was her day off. She originally wanted to go to the highest building with her, but was ordered to rest. The girl had not rested for more than half a month.
Nicole stood on the balcony of the castle and looked at the steam car in the distance. She stretched out and said,"What are we going to do today?" The girl who was used to being busy suddenly felt free, and she was really not used to it.
Nicole leaned forward against the fence, supported her chin with one hand, and murmured,"It's raining and I can't go to the flower field."
The girl watched the rain for half an hour, then left the balcony humming a ditty taught by Liu Feng. , prepare to go to the laboratory to stay and do some experiments.
In ten minutes, the girl came to the laboratory, put on protective clothing and gloves and started to get busy. She planned to prepare a mosquito repellent. When it rains, there will be more mosquitoes.
Nicole spread a piece of information on the table and murmured to herself,"The information given by His Majesty is still very detailed."
She started looking for materials according to the information, and followed the process step by step. First, she added lemongrass Gather together plants that can repel mosquitoes, such as lemon balm and mint.
Nicole wants to mash these foods, extract the juice inside, and improve them to see if they can be sprayed in the room to repel mosquitoes.
The girl had been tinkering for almost three hours, and after more than a dozen repeated productions and experiments, the last mosquito repellent was quite effective. Although it couldn't kill mosquitoes after smelling it, it would at least be good if it could drive them away.
"It's finally finished, and I can show it to His Majesty tonight to see where there is room for improvement."Nicole thought casually.
The girl tinkered with a lot of things one after another and didn't leave the laboratory until lunch time. She wanted to make something different for lunch.
Before Nicole came to the kitchen, she met Lucy halfway and waved. greeted,"Lucy"
"It's Nicole. Do you have a day off today?"Lucy waved in response.
Nicole moved the hair around her ears and said softly,"Yes, Your Majesty asked me to rest today no matter what. Lucy blinked her golden eyes and said softly,"I have a rest today too.""
"Have you eaten?"Nicole asked with concern.
Lucy shook her head and asked,"Do you want to cook?"
"yes."
Nicole nodded and continued,"Then let's eat together. After we finish eating, I still have something to ask you about the novel."
"No problem at all. You cook me delicious food and I teach you how to write novels. It’s such a happy decision."Lucy smiled brightly.
The two of them entered the kitchen hand in hand. Lucy said she wanted to know how Nicole usually cooks and how to make it so delicious.
Nicole decided to make curry rice for lunch, and it was still frozen in the freezer. It was holding the curry cubes Liu Feng brought back from Earth.
More than half an hour later, Nicole brought out two steaming beef curry rice.
Lucy's golden eyes stared straight, and she said nostalgically,"The last time I ate it was last year. Woolen cloth"
"Yes, I haven’t eaten for a long time."Nicole also missed it very much.
The two quickly finished their lunch and met in Nicole's room, ready to improve the novel about afternoon tea.
Nicole took out a dozen pieces of paper from the drawer and said sheepishly,"You Look, this is the novel I'm writing recently, but it's all scattered."
"It’s okay, just take it slow at first."Lucy said gently, sitting on the stool and starting to browse.
Nicole poured two glasses of water slowly, and sat quietly waiting for Lucy to give her opinions.
Lucy stared at the manuscript very seriously, reading every word. While watching, I stretched out my hand several times to get a cup to drink water, but all of them were empty.
Nicole covered her mouth and laughed several times, and stared at the manuscript with her gray eyes. It was obvious that she was still very nervous.
Half an hour Finally, Lucy raised her head and said softly,"It's written very carefully. It's clear at first glance."
"What's the problem?"Nicole worriedly said that there must be problems when writing a novel for the first time.
Lucy spread out a few pages and pointed at several places and said,"Here, here, and here, the descriptions are too complicated, so It will seem a bit complicated to readers"
"It turns out that’s the case. No wonder I always confuse myself when I read it."Nicole said thoughtfully.
Lucy nodded slightly, pointed to another place and said,"And here, the sentence description can be a little more gorgeous, but here it seems a bit plain."
Nicole nodded frequently as if she had found a treasure, and said in surprise,"What you said is absolutely right. I always feel that something is wrong in these places, but I just can't explain it.
"Take your time, it's your first time writing, and it's already great to be able to write like this. Lucy encouraged.
Nicole blinked her gray eyes and asked,"But these are all scattered. I don't know how to put them together.""
"Don’t worry, there will still be some time before it can be published. If you have inspiration, write it first. When it’s almost done, I will teach you how to format and combine it."Lucy said gently.
"Okay, then I will continue writing."Nicole's doubts these days have been cleared up.
Lucy took a sip of water and asked,"Any more questions? Anyway, today is a day off, so let’s solve it once and for all."
Nicole nodded heavily, spread out the paper, and said,"Where is this place? How should I write it? I always don't know how to proceed more smoothly."
Lucy read the words carefully, thought for a while and said,"The problem is very simple. It's that you didn't lay the groundwork for the following. It would be very abrupt to just write about cake."
"So if I said above that milk tea would taste better with strawberry cake, would it be better to write about how to make this cake next?"Nicole asked tentatively.
Lucy was surprised at the girl's intelligence and nodded repeatedly,"Correct. This way the context will be coherent when written."
"You can always gain a lot of knowledge from chatting with Lucy."Nicole smiled sweetly.
"Your book will definitely sell well."Lucy said firmly.
"It doesn't matter, as long as you can publish a book of your own, it doesn't matter whether it sells well or not."Nicole said softly.
Lucy smiled sweetly, took the girl's hand and said,"I'll take you to read my novel, and you can also give me some advice."
"I am glad to."Nicole blinked her gray eyes.
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