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Bai Ye's face was dark after hearing what the other party said, and he couldn't be any darker. He said that this girl was very good and great. If she dared to say this, she should be ready to bear the price.

Yang Nai regretted it after saying this. Although she had never done such a thing, she knew a lot of things. Facing a boy full of blood, let alone a person who was so powerful, saying this was tantamount to provocation.

Yang Nai couldn't help swallowing his saliva at this time, and the word fear was written on his face. After all, he was really scared this time.

"Okay, okay, I have to say you are very good and great."

"I'll let you know whether it's 10 minutes or hours in a while."

Bai Ye spoke viciously at this time.

The main thing is that my strength is ready to break through. It’s better not to mess around these two days and try to be more obedient. But I never expected to meet a girl who would provoke me like this. Bai Ye said that this person seemed to want to stick out her tongue and roll her eyes!

Yang Nao, you looked at the other party's vicious look, and a scared "four-nine-three" expression appeared on your face. You have to be afraid. This person seems to be serious.

"You should be glad that I may break through these two days, so I plan not to mess around."

"Otherwise, for what you said, I must call 120 and go to the hospital tomorrow to make you famous."

Bai Ye spoke fiercely at this time, and after hearing this, the other party had a scared expression on her face, but in fact, she was muttering in her heart, is it so exaggerated? Do you really think I have never understood these things?

Bai Ye also read the other party's inner thoughts and said that you are really great!

Keep on killing yourself, keep on killing yourself crazily on the edge of killing yourself, sooner or later you will cry.

Although Bai Ye was thinking this in his heart, his hands were not slow at all. He grabbed the man and then spoke with a smile.

"Don't worry about those things for now, just get through these 10 minutes."

After hearing this, Yang Nai wanted to say that she hadn't agreed yet, you are messing around!

"I haven't..."

But he couldn't say anything. After Bai Ye left, the other party got up after a while, put on his clothes, and spoke with gritted teeth.

"Asshole!"

"Baga!"

"hentai!"

"You bastard, why don't you just eat me up? You don't have martial ethics and use thunder and lightning to stimulate me. Are you still a human being?"

Yang Nai never expected that she would experience the feeling of heaven in 10 minutes, and at the same time, she looked at the scars all over her body. Remembering that guy said to leave a mark, I will leave you a mark!

After recovering, I became worried again. It was over. If I continued to provoke others like this, I would have to call 120. I didn't want this to get out. Would she still be able to live with shame?

Bai Ye had already returned home. After a long time of trouble, these people had also taken a shower.A steaming hot girl sat in the living room.

Bai Ye was a little curious when he saw this scene.

"There is another one. How dare you go back now?"

These people knew what the other party had encountered, and then Meigan shook her head.

"No, Senior Shiyu went back to get her notebook and said she wanted to continue writing the manuscript."

Bai Ye laughed after hearing this.

"Come on, I remember that her novel was about to be cancelled, and she bought a ghost. There are a lot of problems."

Just then, the other party took the things and went downstairs. Then he heard this and immediately spoke with a gritted teeth tone.

"Junior brother, it's not good to say bad things about people behind their backs."

When the words came out, the people present were stunned. They didn't expect it to be so coincidental. They even suspected that this person did it on purpose.

Bai Ye heard the other party's gnashing teeth and curled his lips. You then spoke in the tone of Lazy Sheep.

"I think what I said is right. After all, your thing does have a lot of problems."

"I am the No. 1 in sales ranking. Do you think there will be any problems?"

Bai Ye was not modest at this time. Instead, he spoke in a matter-of-fact tone.

After hearing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu clenched her fists slightly, expressing her anger. Of course, she also knew the situation of the guy in front of her, but was it so bad?

"Tell me what the problem is?"

At this moment, Kasumigaoka Shiyu expressed her dissatisfaction with her real name.

"There are so many problems. The writing style, plot, and design are all terrible."

"Not to mention that you are a writer of romance novels, but you are a single guy who has never been in love. Can you write about that kind of feeling?"

"Or do you have someone you like?"

"You don't have any of these. Why do you think a single guy can write a romance novel? You haven't experienced this feeling yourself. Even if you want to write, you have to rely on YY to fill in the blanks. But I think your imagination is obviously not enough, and there are problems in many places."

Bai Ye's words can be said to be a blunt blow, and at this time Meigan and Tuanzi also wanted to talk about it. This guy told Bai Ye to shut up and not to go too far.

Although La La felt that Bai Ye was doing it for the other party's good, he was very strict.

"Of course, you can publish, which means it can still be saved, but you just started high and then went down."

To be honest, Kasumigaoka Utaha would be lying if she said she wasn't sad or angry, after all, her hard work was devalued by this bastard, but when she heard the other party say it could still be saved, her eyes lit up again, after all, everything else was false, and it could be saved, this was the best thing for her 0 ........

"Do you mean my novel can still be saved?"

"Yes."

"Let me guess, you probably didn't have much experience before, and you didn't study it specifically. You were born in a wild way, so you made a lot of mistakes.piles of them."

"As long as you find someone to give you some pointers and teach you, you can still save it."

Bai Ye has also read the other party's manuscript. He simply read it when he went to his room. You know what the situation is.

According to the plot, it depends on that loser to promote it, but Bai Ye feels that the loser's promotion gave the other party confidence, so the later part was written well, and the part that was cut off was really average at this time. Either he was confident that it would be better to write it later, or something else. Anyway, the current appearance is really not up to standard and needs to be greatly changed!

After hearing this, although Kasumigaoka Utaha felt hopeful again, she also felt very powerless at the same time. The main reason was that there was a very serious problem, that is, she didn't have a good teacher to teach her.

"The most important thing is that this guy said that he had to find someone to teach him, and he was not very hopeless, but he was the only one who could teach him. . . "

Suddenly, Kasumigaoka Utaha noticed this carefree guy, and her eyes lit up. Isn't this guy the best teacher? After all, he is amazing in every aspect.

After Kasumigaoka Utaha made up her mind, she walked behind Bai Ye with a smile.

"Junior, as the best-selling author, can you give me a little advice as a writer who is about to cut his waist? ”

Kasumigaoka Utaha can be said to have given it her all. After all, this novel can be said to have suppressed countless of her hopes, and even her grades have dropped madly. In order to pursue the path of literature, she can be said to have made a desperate bet, but the result turned out to be like this. Now there is hope and she doesn't want to give up. (To read the exciting novels, go to Faloo Novel Network!)

If it weren't for the fact that there were a few people here who couldn't let go, and because of the contract, she would even think of sacrificing a little!

After hearing what the other party said, Bai Ye did not give a direct answer, but spoke in a sly tone.

"In this country, shouldn't the players bend down and bow to 90 degrees? And the clothes on the front must be open."

"Otherwise, it's not sincere enough. ”

Bai Ye didn’t wait for the other party to react when he said this mean thing, but Lala, who didn’t know the rules here, spoke first.

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