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Moreover, these expert judges not only saw Lin Yun's skill in terms of emotions, but also in terms of story design.

Huang Yulang also writes long stories, so when I see this kind of depiction, I clearly understand how powerful Lin Yun is.

He said with emotion:"Lin Yun's plot was really well portrayed."

"Xuan Yizi's death is inevitable. In terms of plot design, Teacher Ouyang has already said it very well before."

"And what I want to say is that the plot is meticulously portrayed and flows smoothly, and it makes the audience's emotions rise step by step. It is really amazing."

"For example, Xuan Yizi's offline was not a sudden explosion, but was laid down little by little. The villain's power is portrayed from the front, and then Xuan Yizi teaches Huo Linfei and their super beast weapons, but they are unable to complete it and are suppressed by the villain little by little."

"Then to the back, the Xuanwu spaceship is stuck between the cannonball and the earth, and Huo Linfei is unable to explode. Under this pressure, Xuan Yizi's death together can not only vent the previous depression, but also have an explosive point."

"Xuan Yizi's offline appearance can also cause emotional fluctuations in the audience. The rhythm is controlled so well. Neither wasted energy on the plot, nor was it too hasty and lacked emotion."

"If you ask me, Lin Yun's power is no worse than that of many mature authors!"

Teacher Xuemei:"Yes, and it's not just the power of writing that arouses emotions."

"Lin Yun was able to create the charm of the character Xuan Yizi in such a short period of time. This is the reason why the audience's emotions fluctuated so much after Xuan Yizi's explosion."

"Lin Yun is also very good at writing characters."

"Usually we say that the three elements of a novel are characters, plot, and background. Teacher Ouyang also interjected:"The most important thing among them is the characters.""

"It can be said that any story written is to bring those characters to life and let the audience see the birth of a living life."

"Lin Yun can have this kind of character creation ability, and if nothing unexpected happens in the future, he can become everyone!"

He has always been willing to exaggerate about outstanding people. Lin Yun's writing of these contents is excellent.

Especially the character creation, which is called"Jue" in one word.

In a short period of time, Xuan Yizi was born, then left, and inspired Regarding the audience's emotions, if this design is not good, then it really won't work.

Even after Teacher Ouyang finished speaking, Wang Ze, who was standing beside him with disdain, didn't say a word, but he had no choice but to admire him in his heart.

At least here Judging from the plot, Wang Ze also knew that he would definitely not be able to write it.

But he wanted to save face and admit that this player was better than himself, so he would not be able to say this.

Apart from them, Bingbing on the host stage saw Xuan Yizi She couldn't help but feel soft in her heart.

She was originally a girl and didn't have much experience, so she couldn't stand such a sad story.

Although Xuan Yizi is not a handsome guy or a beautiful woman, his portrayal in the previous , like a kind elder, reminded

Bingbing of his father. Seeing Xuan Yizi give his last words, watching Xuan Yizi tell Miao Shoujun and the others to go on by themselves, it was like seeing the tenderness of an old father before his death..

How can a little girl like her accept it? Not only her, but even many female viewers feel uncomfortable when they see it.

And the story can reflect the creator's heart.

After Bingbing finished reading Xuan Yizi's story, she looked at Lin Yun, feeling in her heart There is already a slight resonance inexplicably

"Can he write such a good story and have his inner feelings be so delicate?"Bingbing murmured in her heart, looking at Lin Yun thoughtfully.

But she was still hosting after all. After a moment of silence, she could only collect her emotions and return to work.

Bingbing let out a sigh of relief, and then said:

"It seems that the story of player Lin Yun has indeed been underestimated by us. The removal of such a character has already caused huge waves in the hearts of many viewers."

"Several judges and teachers also gave very good evaluations. Perhaps this kind of story can touch people's hearts."

"However, Bingbing also noticed that after the story of the first universe ended, there seemed to be a female character appearing on the villain side, trying to intercept"

"So we will continue to wait and see what kind of story this character will have with the protagonist group."

She also noticed the appearance of the Scorpion King later. Not only she, but everyone could see that this female character should be extraordinary.

Lin Yun probably had several villains in mind, so he connected it directly here.

Although each audience is still immersed in the story of Xuan Yizi, they are more curious after all, so they have to continue watching to see what the story will be like.

This female villain also seems extraordinary, and what she says may also hint at the plot.

The blood debt has come to be taken back...

So, what will happen to the story of the second universe? What does this so-called blood debt mean? And will there be new super beast warriors in the second universe?

Countless questions appeared, and Lin Yun slowly picked up his pen and paper and began to describe the new world.……

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