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The audience's comments were endless, after all, the evaluations of several judges were really terrible.

Especially Teacher Ouyang’s high praise at the end seems to have made people see the excitement of the story in advance.

"Bullshit, it's stable. This story should be really stable."

"Nonsense, Teacher Ouyang has already spoken, so why is this so unstable? But I really didn’t expect that just by setting up a world view, the judges would highly praise it."

"The key is that the world view is very attractive. I want to continue watching when I look at these settings."

"Keep watching, the plot behind is the key. Look at Wang Ze's black face. If there is any problem with the plot, he will definitely start complaining directly."

"Indeed, this guy has the sickest brain. I also hope there won’t be any problems with the plot of Lin Yun’s story."

"And although this setting is good, how to start the story is a bit troublesome."

The audience's voice was almost only filled with praise. Although they did not understand professional evaluation, they could understand the judges' words.

Now in the entire judges' table, three judges have already agreed, and the remaining Wang Ze is just himself. That complaint:

"Tsk, what’s the use of this setting!"

"Whether his story is good or not can be seen from the beginning!"

"I want to see how he started and whether he can write stories!"

Wang Ze was still dissatisfied, but when he said what he said, Teacher Ouyang and the others ignored him and just continued to talk to themselves. The audience outside listened to his words and also made all kinds of complaints. It's best to wait until then. Lin Yun had to continue slapping him in the face.

After several judges expressed their attitudes, Bingbing continued:

"From this point of view, Lin Yun’s world view and settings have indeed conquered our judges."

"The audience friends outside must also be very curious about Lin Yun's next performance."

"Because although the settings are approaching perfection, what really determines the quality of the entire work is the content of the story."

"Next, let's continue watching and see what kind of story Lin Yun, the player everyone is paying attention to, can write. Please keep watching the big screen!"

With Bingbing's transitional words, all the audience's attention was focused on Lin Yun's live broadcast room again.

The shock outside did not last long, so Lin Yun had just finished writing the previous settings.

In the creative room, Lin Yun Yun shook his hand casually. After all, he was quite tired after writing a lot of words on the blackboard.

He looked at the settings of the three major sections on the blackboard, nodded with satisfaction, and then said:

"OK, the basic settings are completed."

"Next, let’s just write the plot. In fact, I had some ideas for this story before, and I just happened to be thinking about it while I was writing it."

As he said that, Lin Yun placed the blackboard in front of the table, and then began to use the computer and keyboard to input, which can greatly improve the efficiency of recording.

After he turned on the computer, the large screen outside was also divided into two pieces, one of which read Lin Yun was a projection on Lin Yun's computer, and the content was a word document.

Lin Yun didn't waste any more nonsense. He just picked up two candies on the table and ate them. While typing, he muttered to himself:

"The beginning of the story is the most critical part of the whole story"

"Because if the beginning is not attractive, no matter how good the writing is, no one will read it. On the contrary, if the writing is good at the beginning but bad at the end, then at least others will read it."

"The criteria for good or bad at the beginning are nothing more than a few points:"

"1. Screen readers, determine the track, and highlight buying points. At the beginning of the story, you need to write the content that best reflects the characteristics of your story, so that viewers who like this subject can see it at a glance, and viewers who don’t like this subject need not waste energy trying to please them."

"2. Enter the main plot, leave suspense, and win over the audience. This cannot be ignored. In addition to clearly showing your track at the beginning, you must also quickly enter the plot. Many novice writers write a bunch of inexplicable things, thinking they are leaving suspense, but they actually drive away the audience."

"3. Watch smoothly, the content focuses on the protagonist. The content focuses on the protagonist, so that the audience can quickly feel a sense of involvement, instead of constantly changing the perspective and having a bunch of characters at the beginning, making the audience not know who is the key."

"So at the beginning of what I’m going to write, I have to start with the protagonist, get into the main line at the beginning, and use some methods to create suspense and attract the audience to continue reading."

"As for the protagonist, well……"

Lin Yun thought, changed his writing, and continued:

"As mentioned earlier, the various forces are divided according to animal elements."

"Then choose Qilin as the protagonist. This is the auspicious animal of China and it is very representative."

"Therefore, the protagonist’s name is……"

【Fire Linfei! 】

When he said this, he immediately seemed to have his own ideas, and then started to write formally.

【Huo Linfei: He is an ordinary student of Blue Fox International Middle School in the first parallel universe. He has a warm-blooded and brave personality, but is somewhat narcissistic and frivolous. He is just an ordinary student on weekdays, but in fact he is a super beast warrior hidden in the first universe. At critical moments, he will awaken the energy in his body and embark on a journey! 】