As soon as the morning class is over.
Bai Yu followed the agreement and came to the service department.
As soon as he opened the door, he saw that Kasumigaoka Shiu and Yukinoshita Yukino had already arrived.
"Thank you for the promotion."
Kasumigaoka Shiyu's burgundy eyes flashed with gratitude.
Early in the morning, her editor called her and told her that she had been enthusiastically recommended by a very popular book artist.
Although the effect was not good, It is unknown for the time being, but I heard from the editor that it is very likely to bring about a turnaround for her work that is about to be cut.
After knowing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu naturally knew that it was Bai Yu who did it.
For this junior student who helped her seriously, she I am also very grateful in my heart
"I had already agreed to this request from Mr. Hiratsuka."Bai Yu chuckled and said nonchalantly.
"No."
Kasumigaoka Shiyu shook her head,"Although it's because Teacher Hiratsuka asked you to ask for help, in the final analysis, it's me who has troubled you."
"I owe you a favor for this matter. If you have any requests, you can always ask me."
Of course, there is no ambiguous emotion in these words. It is just a normal communication between classmates.
After experiencing this incident, Kasumigaoka Shiyu obviously has a very good impression of Bai Yu and is grateful to him.
But it is not enough to have a good impression. To the extent that the two have known each other for less than a day, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's true nature will not be revealed in front of an unfamiliar person like Bai Yu. She still looks like a cold senior.
Bai Yu smiled slightly and didn't say anything unnecessary. Such kind words.
This is exactly what he wants. After all, he will really ask Kasumigaoka Shiyu for missions in the future.
Of course he will not be polite about this favor. After all, he is also exchanging favors with Eiri. Come on.
Bai Yu will not do thankless things. Even a great beauty like Kasumigaoka Shiyu cannot let him be treated as a licking dog who paid for nothing.
"Now that you two have finished communicating, let's go back to the commission itself."
Yukinoshita Yukino, who had been silent until now, interrupted the exchange between the two with a cold opening.
But while she was speaking, her cold eyes couldn't help but glare at Bai Yu in shame.
Obviously, last night, After she went back, she investigated the matter of the notebook.
After knowing what kind of thing the notebook was, Yukinoshita Yukino felt ashamed. Naturally, she had no good feelings towards Bai Yu, the person who proposed the notebook. She snorted in her heart. Sure enough, Boys' High School Those who have such creatures are full of obscene creatures, even a guy like Bai Yu who has excellent grades is no exception.
"So is it."
Bai Yu smiled slightly and took the initiative to sit aside.
It would be better to get the talisman reward as soon as possible.
As for the contemptuous look in Yukinoshita Yukino's eyes, he would not take it seriously.
"Let me tell you first."
Yukinoshita Yukino cleared her throat and looked serious,"Last night, I carefully studied my senior's work, and I have to say that it is indeed a very excellent and rare book for newcomers."
The fact that Yukinoshita Yukino is picky and able to speak out words of praise is enough to prove that Kasumigaoka Shiha's works are indeed excellent.
"But there are still some contents that I think are not very harmonious. For example, the logic of the heroine's behavior makes me a little bit incomprehensible. Why would she develop a crush on the male protagonist who bullied her after being bullied? Normal people wouldn't do this, right?……"
"Also, the male protagonist obviously already has a girlfriend, but he went to flirt with the female lead. Is such a scumbag really suitable to be the male protagonist?……"
"also……"
Yukinoshita Yukino started serious mode and spoke out the shortcomings of this book without mercy.
After listening to Yukinoshita Yukino's criticism, Kasumigaoka Shiyu frowned and became thoughtful.
She did agree with some of what Yukinoshita Yukino proposed, but there were also some that she didn't agree with.
However, she was not dissatisfied because of this. After all, Yukinoshita Yukino was just a reader, not an author. More importantly, she obviously didn't know much about light novels and criticized her book from the perspective of classic literature..
So I can understand.
As a person who seeks help, Kasumigaoka Shiu is very tolerant of Yukinoshita Yukino, a school girl who is serious about helping her.
Even if she doesn't agree, she won't say anything.
"That's all I have to say."After Yukinoshita Yukino finished speaking, she paused, and then looked at Kasumigaoka Shiu apologetically,"If there is anything I said that is wrong, please forgive me, senior."
Obviously, she also knows that her words are a bit harsh.
It may anger this senior.
But as a perfectionist, Yukinoshita Yukino will not deliberately hide her true thoughts and play some boring game of reading the air.
"Yukinoshita-senpai's comments are not based on nothing. Many of the things she said are indeed correct, and I will keep them in mind."
Kasumigaoka Shiyu simply thanked Yukinoshita Yukino. She still saw the other party's efforts. The thick dark circles around her eyes proved that Kasumigaoka Shiyu is not an unkind person. To this She was also grateful for the behavior of the school girl.
Afterwards, Yukinoshita Yukino and Kasumigaoka Shiu looked at Bai Yu. They wanted to hear what kind of evaluation Bai Yu could come up with.
Whether it was Yukinoshita Yukino or Kasumigaoka Shiu Qiu Shiyu will not underestimate Bai Yu's ability, and both of them want to hear what Bai Yu's opinion is.
"I mainly talk about areas that can be improved and some writing methods that are useful to senior students."
Bai Yu smiled faintly. Yukinoshita Yukino had already said more comprehensively. He didn't want to say something repetitive.
Instead, he planned to say something that could help Kasumigaoka Shiyu.
So, he added some common and practical things from his previous life. The writing methods are revealed.
Although those writing methods were already old routines when Bai Yu traveled through time, they are still very novel in this world. That is to say, Bai Yu did not wake up his memory, and was influenced by his soul, so he used it subconsciously. In addition, it has not appeared on the market yet.
As Bai Yu concentrated on slowly speaking out the many experiences accumulated in his mind.
He did not notice at all that Yukinoshita Yukino and Kasumigaoka Shiu, who were listening, gradually changed their expressions. They became solidified, with shocked looks in their eyes.
Obviously, many things Bai Yu said were too shocking to these two people.
Whether it was Kasumigaoka Shiu or Yukinoshita Yukino, both They are literary girls who have loved reading since childhood and have read countless classic works at home and abroad, both ancient and modern.
Their vision is not comparable to that of ordinary students, and is even as good as that of most professionals engaged in literature.
Naturally, you can hear Bai Yu's words. This seemingly simple statement is actually a theory that is enough to cause a revolution in the current literary world.
It is really unbelievable that a student who is still studying can come up with this.
Yukinoshita Yukino once again She was shocked by Bai Yu's talent. In the face of the other party's unattainable talent, she only felt that she, who had always thought she was excellent, was simply pitiful, just like the ordinary students she looked down on. A deep sense of frustration once again emerged in her In her heart, her expression fell into confusion.
On the other side, Kasumigaoka Shiyu was also very shocked at first, and she also felt deep admiration for Bai Yu.
But the more she listened, the weirder she felt.
Because Bai Yu said Many things she had experienced gave her a feeling of déjà vu.
This feeling of déjà vu made her subconsciously irritated.
However, at the moment when this irritability emerged, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's mind flashed, and suddenly I know why I feel irritated and why I feel familiar.
What Bai Yu said seems to correspond to many plots in the book about the dead eunuch!
Could it be that this guy Bai Yu has also read the book about the dead eunuch and is also the one who A loyal reader of Dead Eunuch?
Kasumigaoka Shiyu's eyes lit up, and he suddenly felt like meeting someone of the same kind. His eyes looking at Bai Yu suddenly became much softer, and the corners of his mouth could not help but raise slightly.
He found that someone had something to do with him. Companions with the same hobbies are really an unexpected blessing.
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