Let you write about wandering, you write about wandering the earth

I saw Su Yang gradually writing paragraphs of text on the screen.

Background setting supplement:

When a dungeon is established, humans will enter the dungeon by drawing lots.

In the face of this disaster, the government did its best to ensure everyone's right to survival.

Instead of focusing on reputation, money, or status.

In addition to its efforts on Earth, the international community spent thirty years building the Navigator International Space Station.

It will fly with the earth at a relative position of 100,000 kilometers, providing early warning and communication guarantee for the earth.

Character setting:

Male protagonist: Liu Qi, male, car mechanic. His father is Liu Peiqiang, an astronaut stationed on the International Space Station"Navigator" by the Dragon Kingdom.

Thinking of this, Su Yang temporarily stopped typing.

The film uses the father-son relationship between Liu Peiqiang and his son as the undercurrent, and uses the dialogue between Liu Peiqiang and Liu Qi as the entry point.

So first of all, the audience must experience the emotions between ordinary father and son in this situation.

Although it tells the story of all mankind.

However, this kind of emotion between characters allows the audience to feel the arc of the characters even more.

Wait until the future is advanced to when Liu Peiqiang controls the space station to impact Jupiter.

It makes the audience feel it even more.

In this case, Liu Peiqiang faced a difficult choice.

And how touching his courage and determination are.

After thinking about it, Su Yang continued to write

[In the cold universe, Liu Peiqiang sits in a sleeping cabin]

[The entire spacecraft exudes a cold atmosphere.]

[Outside the window is the same cold universe. And here is an unknown number of kilometers away from his home.......]

[And the only thing watching him at this moment is just a robot——MOSS]

[It is the central control robot of the entire space station. Its round camera is like the big eyes of a monster, without any emotion.]

[Then Liu Peiqiang lay in the sleeping cabin, staring upward, not knowing what he was thinking.]

[After the cabin door closes, he will fall into a deep sleep.]

[At this time, in his last conscious moments, he remembered the previous conversation between him and his son.......]

[Dad will fly to the sky]

[become a star]

[keep looking at you......]

[The scene cuts back to when the father and son were still around each other and said the above conversation.]

[At that time, Liu Qi was just a child, and this was one of the few times Liu Peiqiang could spend with him.]

["Dad, will you really become a star?"]

[In the tent with warm and soft light, the little boy Liu Qi asked innocently]

["Yes." Liu Peiqiang gently kissed Liu Qi's forehead and held a photo of their family of three in his hand.]

["From now on, you just need to count, three, two, one. look up......Then you can see dad......"]...

The audience who saw Su Yang writing were a little emotional.

【I didn’t expect that Contestant No. 7’s emotional descriptions would be so delicate.】

【Just a few paragraphs later, I can feel the image!】

【What a great transition in this shot. First, it is written about the loneliness and coldness in the universe, and then it switches to the time when the father and son get along.......】

【Coupled with the dialogue between father and son, it’s really amazing! Contestant No. 7 is such a genius!】

【It's so terrifying. It seems that he not only has a brain, but also has the writing power to match it.......】

At this time, in the main live broadcast room of the judges, the judges were also commenting on it.

"This description is really good." Zou Jing praised,"In the context of an earth crisis, it is very appropriate to use the warm emotions between a father and son as the entry point."

"And he also designed a dialogue between father and son. I think that promise will definitely appear in subsequent plots to sublimate the relationship between father and son."

Shen Tong also agreed with this, but he also put forward a different view.

"What Teacher Zou said is indeed correct, and what contestant No. 7 has written so far is also perfect."

"But after all, the tone he set at the beginning was very high, and everyone could see it. He was telling a story with a background for all mankind."

"So we still have to read on. Although his writing is good at the beginning, it is hard to say whether he can still control it when the plot advances step by step and the situation becomes larger."

"Yes, this will be a great test of his skills."Xu Ke was a little worried,"Many people can write this kind of relationship between individuals well, but as I just speculated,"

"If we were to describe a plot in which all human beings return to their homes and eventually die there, it would be easy to fall into a cliché if you are not careful."

"In other words, it doesn't taste right. Now that he has brought out the sense of expectation, if the climax and ending are slightly flawed, then this work still has regrets."

After hearing the comments from several judges, Bingbing also echoed:

"It seems that player No. 7 has great ambitions in this competition to advance to the top 64!"

"I have to say that currently, the subject matter he is writing is indeed the most attractive."

"But it is still very difficult to complete the story smoothly."

"Let’s keep reading!"