Let you write about wandering, you write about wandering the earth

Su Yang stopped writing this.

The audience and judges all wailed when they saw him stop writing.

They all saw from Su Yang's words that this should be the first climax.

But it’s not incomprehensible, after all, under such a big imagination subject.

Su Yang had to think carefully to avoid making mistakes in the script.

And the most important are two points.

1: What is the purpose of the male and female protagonists coming out?

2: What are the workers on the surface doing?

So, they all started discussing

【I have to say that Contestant No. 7 Su Yang really has some experience with this writing technique of comparison.】

【Yes, he wrote earlier that the underground city is celebrating the Spring Festival, and it is a bustling and lively scene. But soon the severe cold of the outside world will come】

【It’s minus 84 degrees! The world before the end is too scary】

【The section where Su Yang describes the city is also very good. It would be even better if you could see the pictures!】

【Let’s see what the judges say......】

Switch to the judges’ main live broadcast room

The judges were also very satisfied with Su Yang's writing just now.

"I have to say that Contestant No. 7 Su Yang did a really good job in describing this doomsday scene."

Shen Tong praised

"He used three comparisons in total. Above and below ground, excitement and silence, warmth and coldness"

"As the saying goes, there is no harm without comparison. When he writes this, it better reflects the value of the spirit of those who still choose to work outside in this desperate era and work hard for mankind to return home."

"yes."Zou Jing also added,"I noticed that Su Yang last described a giant steel beast that sprayed flames."

"I think that's what people working on the surface do."

"After all, energy is definitely needed to maintain such a large dungeon."

Xu Ke nodded:"Those residents living in the underground city can still have a temporarily stable and peaceful life because of these people who are still working in an environment of minus 83 degrees."

"Without the efforts of those people, most people would not have a normal life."

"By the way, let’s take a look at what other players are writing. Looking at player No. 7, he should be thinking about it for a while."Shen Tong suggested

"Can. His thinking time should not be short this time."Zou Jing nodded.

She admired Su Yang very much.

So she also hoped that he could calm down at this time and think about the next plot.

"Okay, then let’s listen to the three judges and teachers and show the screen to other contestants’ live broadcast rooms."

Besides, the host Bingbing smiled sweetly.

As the screen switched, the expressions on the judges' faces were different.

Because they also saw that the themes written by many contestants were too homogeneous.

Although they all It is about wandering, but it is still a bit dull compared to Su Yang's story of all mankind leaving their homes in the apocalypse and then trying to return home.

It can be seen that in the key game of advancing to the top 64, these people are too demanding. Stable.

They put a lot of energy and pen and ink into the characters' experiences.

For example, they set up a very miserable protagonist, and then started to write about how miserable his life experience was.

Growing up, he never had good luck. Everyone around him harmed him.

From then on, he began to live a wandering life....

But this way of writing falls behind.

Using such a large space, the effect is not as impressive as Su Yang's simple words.

"Why......"The more Shen Tong looked at it, the more he sighed.

"These players are demanding change! This is not the story the audience wants to see!"He said with some hatred that iron cannot become steel.

"Even if the intention is to be profound and educational, it doesn't mean that it is enough to deliberately make people miserable."Zou Jing also sighed.

"Yes, only at this time can the strength of player No. 7 be more highlighted."

"I have to say, this is also a kind of contrast’！"Xu Ke said with a smile

【Hahahaha, Director Xu is really humorous. I didn’t expect Su Yang to use contrast outside the court.】

【That's not true, but there's nothing we can do about it. After all, not everyone has a mind like Su Yang's.】

【Let’s put aside the imaginative and unimaginative aspects, but at least the story should be written so that we can continue to read it. To be honest, I have no interest in reading the stories written by other contestants.】

【yes......Our own lives are so miserable. After school and get off work, we go home and want to watch something relaxing. Who wants to watch that kind of thing?】

【Although Su Yang's subject matter is not a lighthearted one, his story is attractive and can arouse our empathy! ]

However, just when the viewers following in the main live broadcast room started to complain.

Many barrages suddenly floated in

【Damn it! Stop reading now, Su Yang is starting to write!】

【What? So fast!】

【Go back quickly, go back quickly......】

For a time, countless viewers in the main live broadcast room disappeared and poured into Su Yang's live broadcast room again.

The judges who noticed this were also a little surprised

"what happened? Come back to Su Yang’s live broadcast room and have a look!"

Zou Jing said impatiently.