I watched the second short video and let Wanjie break through the defense

Under the gaze of all the beings in heaven

【The well-known author of online articles - Yuren - overall score is 4.6 points!】

【Representative works: Ambiguous World, School Beauty World, etc.】

"I feel like I haven’t finished reading the online article gwy for half my life. I guess I hired a ghostwriter."

"He may be one of the few authors who has caused great losses to the platform."

"Give him a copy of School Beauty's Personalized Master, and he can go bankrupt to the point of singularity!"

"It is said that the main character is still a C after I don’t know how many years? If you put it in an online literary environment, it would be considered unique, right?"

"It's fun and enjoyable to read a plot once, but if you write the same plot ten times in a novel, that's too much."

"md, it is a good book when it is finished at Tianjie Island"

"It’s hard to imagine whether your book will be finished first or mine."

"The male protagonist is almost ready for sterilization"

"Ambiguous World almost gave me away back then, but now School Beauty hasn't been updated yet? You really plan to eat it for the rest of your life, right?"

"As long as you can make money, you won't be miserable."

"To put it another way, this author is also remarkable, at least in the entire Internet literary circle, there are not many people who can do this."

"It's better to send me away"

"Some people say that he failed because he kept writing to make money, while others say that if he continues to write, his youth will never end. Whether it is true or not, I prefer to believe the latter."

Fight to break the world

"This recorder is a bit strange"

"The complaints are all about the relatively long stories he recorded?"

"Isn’t the story long?"

"If I watch a story end"

"It always feels a bit empty."

Xiao Yan can't understand.

Logically speaking, this story doesn't seem to have received too much criticism.

In this case, if you don't finish it and write it longer, it shouldn't receive so many bad reviews, right?

Although there are similar stories in other worlds. criticism.

But this one seems to be particularly cared for in this regard.

"is it possible"

"Mainly in terms of repeatability"

"For example, brat, no matter how well you write your story,"

"But if you go to Daqian"

"Still repeating the routine of breaking off the engagement and thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi"

"Doesn’t it look boring?"

Yao Lao combined the words in the comments.

He probably fantasized about it.

If according to the situation exposed in the comments, after Xiao Yan's growth experience, he gave 24 examples.

When Xiao Yan heard this, he couldn't help but nodded.

"really"

"Even if the world is more powerful"

"But if the disciple becomes Dou Di in the future,"

"If we continue the story of people breaking off the engagement and the good-for-nothing counterattack,"

"It just sounds boring"

"It's not logical either"

"According to this idea"

"I'm afraid this is the case in both worlds."

The world of watchmen

"The story was criticized for being too long"

"At the end, the previous level was not maintained"

"Also criticized"

"It looks like this"

"It’s not easy to be a recorder"

"After all, stories sometimes don't seem like they can change."

Xu Xinnian had a playful look in his eyes.

He chuckled and shook his head.

He expressed considerable"sympathy" for the recorder.

Judging from the comments in the light curtain.

Except for the world where those particularly amazing protagonists lived, other records Those who record them will be criticized more or less for the problems in the world.

As a result, their ratings will be lowered.

But the key point is that these recorders only"write down".

They cannot directly change the world.

"cut"

"After all, it’s not the recorder himself who can’t"

"Nothing else to say"

"I can't even figure it out"

"Since this world can be criticized by critics as being too long"

"That time span will definitely not be much shorter than some fairy worlds"

"such a long time"

"The protagonist is actually a C?"

"Is there something wrong with this person's health?"

Xu Yinluo had a look of disdain on his face.

He had just traveled through time not long ago, but he got in the car early.

Although this is not something worth publicizing.

But it is better than being a C all his life, right?

If he really is a normal man..

And she is still the protagonist.

She is always accompanied by the heroine.

Or she encounters various incidents.

How can she keep it up?

"How is it impossible?"

"Doesn’t the Great Love Immortal just want immortality?"

"There are too many things to do in one's life"

"It’s not like you have to prove yourself through that kind of thing."

A look of disdain appeared in Xu Xinnian's eyes.

He spoke righteously.

"oh"

"So you’re full of green tangerines, right?"

Xu Yinluo also spoke with the same disdain.

In one sentence,

Xu Xinyin's face turned red.

"I...I was just going with my colleagues."

"Do you think it's like you?!"

"No need to explain, it’s just that your back doesn’t hurt when you stand and talk."

"Disgraceful to gentlemen!"

Snow World

"What a miserable recorder"

"The world was also criticized for being too long."

Wen Hua shook off the snowflakes on his sword.

He looked at the various low-scoring comments in the sky.

He kept shaking his head.

"There must be something wrong with the story itself"

"otherwise"

"How could it be criticized?"

"Apart from anything else, aren't the perfect world and the dragon talisman world both very long in time?"

"Why don't I see those recorders being told that the story is too long?"

"Reviewers even thought the story was too short."

Prince Xu wrapped up his clothes and sneered.

His eyes were full of disdain.

The next second, he was lifted up by a hand.

"twelfth lunar month of winter"

"It's a good time to practice sword fighting"

"How about you have time to comment on the works of other documentaries here?"

"It's better to get up and practice sword practice for me."

Li Chungang directly threw Prince Xu to the end of the snowdrift.

He also threw the long sword in his hand and spoke directly

"Practice, practice, practice now"

"But if this prince has practiced well,"

"Plus the protagonist’s luck"

"Why don't you just throw other people into the street?"

"What if we accidentally change the reputation of our world record holder?"

"He was also scolded for writing a story that was too long."

"That would be terrible"

"This prince has a troubled conscience."

Prince Xu was not being pretentious.

He stood up and patted the snow on his body.

He raised his sword and said

"Crown Prince"

"In broad daylight"

"Stop daydreaming"

"Our world is so big"

"You're not going anywhere."

Old Huang grinned.

In return, Prince Xu gave him a deep eye roll.

"Be careful when speaking"

"Others can be criticized"

"But this prince is absolutely terrifying in appearance."

At this time, the creatures in the world looked at the various"criticisms" flashed across the light curtain in the sky, and the expressions on their faces were also very strange. I have seen people with bad character being scolded, and I have seen the core of the ending. It's not the same as the previous article.

But this is a long story, and the protagonist is C all his life. Can these problems be criticized like this?

And the score is still the one closest to the third master?

"How to describe it, I think it can be said that with a mortal body, it is comparable to the gods! Even though he didn't do too many wrong things, he could still get low ratings almost as much as someone like Third Young Master, which was quite a skill!"

"Apart from anything else, this protagonist is a bit pitiful. The name of the world is obviously the school beauty and ambiguous, but he ends up being C all his life? Don'tIt’s really not okay to tell me about this protagonist, right?"

"This is a bit insulting! Can’t people keep themselves clean? Can’t people have more important things to do? For those who really do great things, don't they have to accomplish something first and then talk about the love between their children?"

"well said! But if given the chance, which protagonist have you seen hesitate? And the protagonists of these two worlds are criticized like this, it must be because they don't cherish the opportunity, and at the same time they haven't accomplished anything big, otherwise how could they be criticized?"

"Don't explain it, if it doesn't work, it won't work. It doesn't matter. Being on this list has already surpassed many people!"

"I hope that when he reaches the end of his story, he will have a chance and not really die alone. That would be too pitiful."

After lamenting the recorder's"unlucky", the conversation among the creatures also focused on the matter of"the protagonist is C all his life". Many men looked at each other and smiled knowingly. How to describe this kind of thing? , can’t be said on the table, but no matter who is involved in this matter, I’m afraid he will be laughed at for the rest of his life.

At the same time, a new figure emerged again in the sky’s light curtain.

【Well-known author of online articles - Gravity - overall score is 3.0! 】(To read exciting novels, go to Feilu Novel Network!)

【Representative works: The Legendary World of Shura, The World of Tianchen, The World of Evil Dragons Against Heaven, The World of Evil Gods Against Heaven, The World of Divine Punishment of Shura, etc.】

"Mars has been destroyed by dump trucks"

"I've been browsing for a long time just to find you and give you one star."

"A person who is hard to describe"

"If you keep updating, The Evil God might be my favorite novel"

"In the past, I would give some reasons for discontinuing the update, but now I just discontinue it if I want to without any explanation. Damn it."

"The first update king in Zongheng, the first man to be trending on Weibo because of the four chapters of the daily update!"

"To be honest, I don’t want to give it even one star."

"What's the point of writing a novel well? Personality is really bad"

"Not to mention anything else, this is more broken than broken, haha"

"The update speed is very fast, I will give you a little star"

"One star is the limit of rating, not your limit!"

"Impersonating an author"

【The well-known author of online articles - Butterfly Blue - overall score is 9.1 points!】

【Representative works: Full-time world, Starlight unannounced world, Melee Mage world, etc.】[]

"The full-time master is invincible, and his fans alone are enough to prove his worth. To this day, many people are still pursuing him."

"Although I know it’s difficult, I still want to watch the World Invitational Championships chapter"

"Melee Mage and Full Time will give you full marks, but one star will be deducted. Because Tianxing updates every year, I doubt whether it is an update or a completion."

"It’s just starting over. If you like it, treat it as an honor rather than a show off."

"The characters are detailed and every character has flesh and blood."

"Although the full-time master can become a god, I still prefer the melee mage."

"At least he wasn't as unconscionable as Mr. Xue San Shao was doing, so he wasted money."

Full-time World

"Alas, that guy is so miserable, his score is actually lower than the previous fishman."

On the second floor of Xingxin Internet Cafe.

After a short period of practice, everyone was sitting at the window taking a rest.

Chen Guo looked at the two figures in the sky.

Sympathy appeared in his eyes.

"This guy called Gravity doesn't seem to have done much wrong."

"But it’s just a matter of interrupting updates or delaying updates."

"can cause so much resentment among commentators"

"hiss"

"How good is this person?"

Lao Wei exhaled thick smoke and couldn't help but shake his head.

Even if Lao Wei tried to break his head, he couldn't think of it.

It doesn't involve such big things as"character" and"virtue".

It can still be criticized so much.

So how much has Gravity gone too far?

"Other people's affairs have nothing to do with us"

"compared to those"

"I'd rather know"

"Some news about the World Championship."

Ye Xiu rarely became serious.

He looked at the comments about his world.

He frowned and thought carefully.

Now the glory league is a domestic competition.

In other words, it is a civil war between clubs.

But according to the past and now Judging from the details exposed, after this"Glory", will there be another World Invitational Tournament?

At that time,

I seem to have really become an"old guy", right?

"never mind"

"You are now recognized as the ceiling"

"Even if it is an invitational tournament"

"You are definitely the most powerful one"

"Now I have to receive many people who want to speak for me every day."

"If you don't agree"

"I can count money with ease."

Chen Guo stretched out and complained feebly.

"That's the ceiling that the light curtain talks about"

"It’s not us who haven’t played in the finals yet"

"Now I want those endorsements"

"In case of failure."

527"The price we bear is not something we can afford."

"Glory is not determined by the light curtain"

"It’s up to us to fight it out ourselves."

Ye Xiu shook his head gently.

Everyone present.

Only he and Old Wei understood.

After the light curtain revealed the future,

Xingxin's road would only be more difficult than before.

Open the champagne now.

The final outcome is failure!

Dou Po world

"feel these recorders"

"A lot of people have been criticized for breaking updates."

"But something like this fish-man is too much."

"It's the first time I've seen him."

Looking at the two figures in the light curtain of the sky,

Xiao Yan couldn't help but shake his head and sigh.

They were also criticized.

Butterfly Blue has at least two other worlds to give it a rating.

And gravity.

Even if it is also recognized."Wonderful".

But he suffered even more criticism.

It is irreparable.

From this point alone, we can see how bad this person is.

"so"

"Persistence is the most precious quality"

"Both for the protagonist of the world and for the recorder"

"Look at Fang Yuan, Empress and others"

"All because of two words: persistence"

"Well respected."

Yao Lao couldn't help but sighed.

"teacher"

"This is not absolute, right?"

"Isn't that fishman quite persistent?"

"Also criticized"

"Just persisting is not enough"

"You have to persevere and do meaningful things at the same time."

Xiao Yan said with a smile.

One sentence made Yao Lao couldn't help but nod.

"good"

"I take it for granted"

"Persistence alone is not enough."

The Tomb of God World"

"This full-time world"

"It seems that he is going through the stage of being a mortal before."

"The audience wants to see the follow-up story"

"But the recorder doesn’t seem to intend to write it down"

"But this is fine"

"What if it's the same as the story of mortals in the fairy world?"

"When the time comes, you may not know that the comments you are looking forward to now will turn into criticism,"

Chen Nan noticed among the comments.

They were all looking forward to those comments about the World Invitational Tournament.

He subconsciously said

"Some stories should end at the most exciting time"

"otherwise"

"Forced to continue writing"

"Will only be criticized"

"For example, after defeating Heaven, you can become the strongest person in the world."

"That would be boring"

"If you don't fight, what will you do?"

Ruffian Long was confused.

He turned the topic around Chen Nan again.

"I will achieve the heaven-defying level in the future"

"Be the first to pry your guy's brain off."

"Look how you can turn around any topic on me"

"What kind of brain circuit is this."

Chen Nan couldn't complain anymore.

He rolled his eyes.

He looked at Ruffian Long and said...