I asked you to write about Fishman, and you went crazy with your creations on the spot?

"OK"

"Let's go and see what's going on at No. 48."

The judges all agreed.

Xiao Sa pressed the remote control panel.

The next second, Lu Chen's room appeared on the TV screen.

Lu Chen was seen pacing back and forth in the room.

But some words were already written on the whiteboard.

"Shaping a rural area based on Guangdong culture"

"Keynote: clan culture, ancestral hall culture."

Seeing the above line,

Xiao Sa read it out directly

"This entry point is novel."

Yan Gelin's eyes suddenly lit up!

"Teacher Liu, as you said, this guy is a bit clever. This trick first defines the attributes of the countryside and determines the rural style. It is quite interesting.

The key choice is Guangdong Province, as themes from Guangdong Province have always been relatively rare."

Shu Ping also commented.

Xiao Sa took the opportunity to introduce:"Several teachers, according to the data, contestant No. 48 Lu Chen is from Guangdong Province, and he ranked first in the regional competition and entered the top 64 in the country."

"It turns out that he is from Guangdong Province, no wonder he sets the tone like this."Yan Gelin understood.

"The culture of Guangdong Province is very rich in clan style, and the ancestral hall culture is the soul. I think it is a good creative direction to introduce the concept of clan into the story."

Liu Heping couldn't help but nodded slightly.

He expressed his appreciation for Lu Chen's approach.

For people in the industry, basing creation on one's own experience has always been a smart and flattering method!

At this time...

Chen Sicheng looked at Lu Chen That handsome and protruding face, the feeling of dissatisfaction in my heart came up again inexplicably.

"The key depends on how to write it later. I feel that this subject matter... is quite difficult. At least I don't have any ideas. No. 48 is so young. I think his experience will be difficult to support such a subject matter."

When Shu Ping heard this, he glanced sideways at Chen Sicheng.

He always felt that this guy seemed a little hostile when he talked about Lu Chen...

He didn't know if he was overthinking...

Yan Gelin also glanced at it from the corner of his eye. One glance at Chen Sicheng, and his thoughts were similar to those of Shu Ping.

As for Liu Heping, he continued to be there, motionless and noncommittal.

At this time, Xiao Sa also felt that something was suddenly wrong in the atmosphere in the judges room.

But he didn't say anything.

After all, the judges had their own opinions. , is a normal thing.

For the program team... the judges have different opinions, which makes the competition more topical!

He returned his eyes to the screen, only to find that Lu Chen suddenly walked to the whiteboard at this time

"Hey, is he going to write?"Xiao Sa quickly reminded.

The judges immediately turned their attention to

………… inside the room.

Lu Chen picked up the black pen again... he had now written out the concept of Tazhai Village.

The next step is to bring out the key figure—Lin Yaodong!

This is how Lin Yaodong was described in the original drama.

Lin Yaodong lost his father when he was young. He grew up wearing hundreds of clothes and eating rotten vegetable leaves. However, he is smart and flexible and dares to think and work hard.

He made his first pot of gold by collecting scraps. Later, his ambition became bigger and he started smuggling cars. Because of the scandal, he had no choice but to escape to Xiangjiang.

When he came back, he became a millionaire.

And successfully ran for the director of Tazhai Village.

After that, he led the villagers to make poison!

A drug kingdom was created, and drugs were sold overseas!

Under his leadership, Tazhai became a well-known advanced and prosperous village locally and even nationwide!

Lin Yaodong not only runs the village.

Also manage yourself!

Not only was he elected as a representative of Dongshan City, he also had multiple positive identities!

For example, philanthropists, investors, large tax payers, etc.

It can be said that Uncle Dong is definitely a talent!

It's a pity that my brain has been used in the wrong way.

If he has his character, he will do the right thing.

Lu Chen believed that he would definitely be able to do very well.

After all, Uncle Dong’s momentum is here, so when it comes to business, he must be on the right track.

So next...

Lu Chen's goal is to deduce Lin Yaodong's story bit by bit.

As long as Lin Yaodong's line is pushed forward.

Then the Tazhai line will naturally go smoothly!

After that, Li Fei and Li Weimin were designed to establish a good police line!

《The overall framework of"Icebreaking Operation" can be revealed.

So... if you write Uncle Dong well,"Breaking the Ice" will be mostly successful! after all……

《In the drama"Breaking Ice", the real core protagonist is Lin Yaodong!

As for Li Fei?

Many viewers responded that Li Fei's character was unflattering and annoying.

In fact, as long as you understand the value of Li Fei's existence.

You can understand that it is inevitable that he is not lovable!

Because the entire plot of"Operation Ice Breaking" relied on him as a vanguard to break through it step by step!

His recklessness is a genetic attribute determined from the beginning of character design.

Because the value of his existence is that of a tool man!

It’s to advance the plot!

You said that a person who is set up as a tool of a reckless man, how could the audience like him?

The key is, he still has the title of"protagonist"!

It makes more sense to be disliked.

The sense of immersion is so bad!

In addition, the protagonists of this genre all have a common problem!

""It's all fake"!

Not only Li Fei

《Hou Liangping in"In the Name of the People" is also in the same situation...

So!

Well designed Lin Yaodong!

It is the top priority!

It's worth Lu Chen's time and energy!

Think of this.

Lu Chen continues to write!

Lines of words appeared on the whiteboard:

——"Tazhai: Tentative village name, keywords: poverty, backwardness"

——"Summary of the story: The protagonist Lin Yaodong grew up in a poor family and lost his father when he was young. He wore Baijia clothes and ate rotten vegetable leaves. He was bullied by his peers from time to time. However, he was resolute and unyielding in nature and was unwilling to bow to fate.

He vowed that he must live a good life and let his family live a good life.

For this reason, he dropped out of junior high school because he had no money. He relied on his own intelligence to educate himself and had a certain knowledge base.

After that, he started trying his hand at business.

I set up a street stall and sold breakfast. I got up early and stayed late every day.

Although he earns little, for him who has never made any money, such a life is quite happy.

Two years have passed like this.

As your experience increases, you get to know the people around you.

Lin Yaodong is no longer satisfied with being a hawker.

He hopes to make more money.

For this reason, he has been looking for opportunities and a business that can make a lot of money.……"

After writing this, Lu Chen deliberately paused and continued to meditate.

——deduction.

You have to push and act at the same time...

How can you write it to the end in one breath?

Otherwise, the nature is different from writing the plot directly.

So, stop where you should.

Write where it should be written.

Where you should"think", you have to"think".

This is what creation should be like!

Seeing Lu Chen suddenly stopped.

Jury room.

Xiao Sa said in surprise:"Hey, is Lu Chen planning to write a story about the rise of a rural boy?"

"It looks a bit like it."Shu Ping nodded.

Chen Sicheng on the side had a smile on his lips, with a hint of disdain.

"I said that we still have to look at the plot arrangement later. Look, it’s still the same old routine, writing about things in the countryside.

However, it must be admitted that the rise of the little man is indeed the most common way of writing rural or urban themes.

He has a relatively rich development trajectory and emotional penetration"

"Yes, the essential point of the theme of the rise of the little guy is that it has a strong sense of immersion! When the protagonist increases his strength and changes his status through hard work, thereby triggering changes in the attitudes of the people around him, these are what the audience loves to see."

Shu Ping also commented

"Did Lu Chen design the tone of a clan just to conform to local customs and culture?"

Yan Gelin frowned and said in confusion.

Looking at it so far,

Lu Chen's plot design did not raise expectations. Instead, it made the story fall into a cliche.

So much so that the expectations suddenly dropped!

This... to be honest , at the beginning of this story, Yan Gelin was a little disappointed...

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