As Lu Chen wrote this paragraph, he secretly took a look at the system panel.
Good guy, the emotional value soared by five million per unit time!
If it doesn't work, netizens are criticizing this plot... even comparing it to"Fortress".
But it’s normal, it’s a science fiction theme with a love element added.
It is indeed a very easy point to criticize.
Looking at"Fortress", the reason why it has been criticized is that it is a super bad movie.
It's nothing more than a cycle of an alien civilization invading, the earth fighting back, and then Luha Shuqi falling in love.
Throughout the entire movie, this pattern was repeated three or four times.
Falling in love accounts for nearly 50% to 60% of the plot in the drama.
The audience is not allowed to curse!
In fact.
When Lu Chen himself was watching"Wandering", he saw the relationship between Liu Peiqiang and Han Duoduo being drawn out from the very beginning.
My heart also skipped a beat.
I always feel like something bad is going to happen.
But a good movie is a good movie.
The emotional line between Liu Peiqiang and Han Duoduo was designed to be relatively restrained from beginning to end.
Two of them have large content and can be highly integrated with the main plot!
Therefore, there is not such a strong sense of abruptness!
However, after all, the audience does not understand the plot, and the emotional ups and downs are understandable.
After withdrawing his thoughts, Lu was about to pick up his pen and continue.
Suddenly I saw a red light flashing in the lower right corner of the console interface.
Click to take a look.
Lu Chen slapped his forehead and was so engrossed in writing that he even forgot about the previous treatment of the planetary engine.
It's been a long time.
The interface system automatically prompts.
Lu Chen clicked to take a look out of curiosity.
See what the effect is.
Along the room, several projection devices emit signals.
A planetary engine injection diagram, made into effects.
Uh...
As expected, the greater the hope, the greater the disappointment.
I thought it would look so awesome.
It's nothing more than coloring the picture and simply making it look like a jet of flames.
If you haven’t seen the movie special effects.
This kind of"two eight three" effect may be quite shocking.
But for Lu Chen, who already knew the final special effects in advance, it seemed too shabby. have to!
Better than nothing.
Lu Chen threw the Sky Elevator, Liu Peiqiang and other storyboards to this system for effects.
It's better than the black and white picture anyway……
……
【Damn it! Naked eyes?!】
【Worri, this is too advanced! Is this the strength of Magic Shadow Factory?! 】
This set of effects, not surprisingly, sparked a heated discussion among netizens
……
Now, the story continues:
Liu Peiqiang:
That was my happiest time, almost none of them.
Han Duoduo and I took the elevator cabin for the first time.
She introduced herself as a low-Earth orbit medical professional.
He's a doctor!
……
【puff! The doctor is still so violent……】
【Duoduo has a sense of contrast!】
【The strongest female doctor in history!】
……
Liu Peiqiang:
I just wanted to make an introduction, but there was a conspicuous bag sitting in the middle. It was really bad...
Then it was my first time riding the space elevator.
The instructor told us that this was our first time in training and we should be careful not to block our trachea with our own vomit. If we vomited, we would have to get out.
He will not help us with artificial respiration.
During the rise, we will be under a lot of pressure.
The earth will not count us any less just because we are new members.
Therefore, check the anti-gravity suit.
Otherwise, our parents would only have two lines of tears left.
……
Write this.
Lu Chen's storyboard transition.
A group of storyboards were given of Liu Peiqiang and Han Duoduo taking the"elevator" together.
……
【The anti-gold suit is also drawn in such detail! Who can tell me how Lu Shen did it?!】
【No, Lu Shen didn’t really receive special training, right? This science fiction element comes at the drop of a hat!】
【@Scholar, brother, please tell me what's going on!】
【Yes, tell me!】
【This guy is probably secretly having fun. He knows, we don’t.】
【Not to mention, the foreigner sitting in the middle is really conspicuous.】
【Two lines of tears? This instructor is so leathery!】
【Okay, great, well written, keep going! Draw more science fiction elements, I love to see them!】
【Who are you talking to upstairs? You're talking so loudly!】
【I didn’t expect that the sky elevator ride would appear so quickly! Lu Shen is going to drive the special effects team crazy!】
【Expect high energy ahead!】
【Anticipate nuclear power ahead!】
……
Liu Peiqiang:
The first time I took the space elevator was something I will never forget.
I thought I could make it to the end.
Unexpectedly, he only lasted ten seconds before he fainted completely.
Fortunately I didn't have breakfast.
Otherwise, I would really vomit...
Of course, it was the same situation for the astronauts of the same period as me.
Collective fainting!
I may not be the best performer!
But I am by no means the worst one!
……
Later, Lu Chen made a new copy of the space elevator storyboard he drew before and moved it over.
……
After Liu Peiqiang passed the assessment.
I officially became a member of the national astronauts.
Next month.
We were freshmen at the same time and received collective training.
Han Duoduo is better than I thought.
I was knocked down by her several times in single combat.
Is she really studying medicine?
With her skills, no one dares to touch her.
Anyway, I didn’t dare to move during the injection.
……
【Got it, the heroine is a tigress! The male protagonist is set up to be in strict control of his wife!】
【Oh, interspersed with a love element, I really like it!】
【Pure drag rhythm】
【If this paragraph were deleted, it would be perfect. Science fiction movies really don’t need love!】
【agree!】
……
Liu Peiqiang:
After a month of hard training.
Duoduo and I successfully passed the preliminary examination and became one of the few in the same period to be selected as intern astronauts at the monthly base.
My life on the moon base, which I thought was boring, has become a journey that I yearn for because of Duoduo.
So here comes the question.
How should I express my love to Duoduo?
This was the question that bothered me the most during that time.
A Nigerian astronaut roommate told me: traveling in space is not important, but giving a bouquet of flowers to your loved one is important.
Is it vulgar?!
I started practicing how to use the most romantic gestures with my backhand to send flowers to the woman I love.
…… puff!
Netizens in the live broadcast room almost fell into the dust!
……
Jury room.
The director and others also smiled:
"The protagonist's character is a bit interesting, quite quirky.
Han Rendong did not comment on the characters:"However, I still think that this kind of science fiction film should not have too many love elements. If these contents are made into a movie, I am afraid it will take up a lot of space.""
Nolan shook his head:"No, generally if the editing is good, these contents can actually be completed in three or four minutes. The space elevator scene is a more important scene, so the duration can be appropriately increased, and other transitions such as training The content can be completed with basically a dozen or at most twenty shots. Generally, a shot only lasts about five seconds, less than two minutes.
Bingbing:"In that case, I think I can accept it. Even if it is a science fiction film, it does not necessarily have to have any love elements. I think it is okay to add an emotional line appropriately.""
Tanaka Yoshiki:"Of course there is no problem in adding a love line, but the key is the length. If it is too long, it will not only slow down the rhythm, but also cause narrative interruption, which is the most fatal. Moreover, there is another point. Generally, emotional scenes are not a strong point for directors who make science fiction films. It’s hard to get a handle on that size. This is also the reason why American science fiction has a relatively small proportion of love elements. Mr. Nolan, what do you think? Nolan sneered:"So I don't really like to add love scenes to my movies. After all, the movie time is limited."
Tanaka:"I hope Mr. Lu can control it well." Bingbing patted her chest:"Don't worry, you two, Teacher Lu Chen will be fine. He is really good at emotional scenes!" The entire Dragon Kingdom audience knows this!
The director nodded and said with a smile:"I can testify to this!" Indeed it is! Tanaka
Yoshiki:"Oh, let's wait and see!" Let’s see how he handles the relationship between Liu Peiqiang and Han Duoduo! This will directly affect my final evaluation!
Nolan nodded:"Me too!""
……
The program crew backstage.
The old factory director kept staring at the screen.
He crossed his arms across his chest, tapping his fingers on his arms.
Even he had to admit that the emotional drama at the beginning was a bit too much... not a"good sign""
……
At this time, outside the screen, China Film!
Han Sanping's office door was pushed open
"You came." (To read exciting novels, go to Feilu Novel Network!)
"This guy really writes science fiction! ?"
Leader Tong took the tea cup from Han Sanping and sat down on his exclusive recliner.
Han Sanping:"Yeah, I really didn't expect that the old factory director's trump card was Lu Chen. The key is writing it now, and it feels pretty good. , quite a feeling!
Leader Tong:"The script was given privately by the old factory director?""
Han Sanping:"That's not the case, I'm afraid the old factory director's thinking is alsoSo advanced"[]
Leader Tong stared at the screen and murmured:"Is it possible that what we talked about before will really come true?"
The two looked at each other for a moment.
……
Liu Peiqiang:
I practiced the posture for several days.
My roommates and even my instructors also gave me advice.
Finally, I gathered up the courage and bought a bouquet of roses, intending to confess my love to Duoduo.
In order to let the flowers pass the security check smoothly, I secretly bribed the security inspector with two packs of Universe brand cigarettes.
When I gave the flowers to Duoduo.
I fully thought that Duoduo would be shy. As soon as she was shy, I would confess my love and give her an engagement ring!
Yes, I even have the ring ready!
But I never expected that Duoduo would not follow the routine.
I was fooled as soon as I opened my mouth.
She asked me who the flowers were for, and she could deliver them to me.
I couldn’t fix it at that time!
I had no choice but to withdraw my troops and choose to"fight another day".
There were boos in the cabin.
Haha, these gringos know their stuff.
We Dragon Country people are humble, low-key, and know the key to current affairs!
Know how to advance and retreat!
Rushing in at this time will only embarrass Duoduo!
I, Liu Peiqiang, understand the ways of the world.
But Duoduo suddenly stopped me and told me that she would hand it over to me when I thought about it. Don’t worry, she will always be there.
Hey, it seems like she didn’t reject me, right?!
……
【I'm so convinced!】
【Haha, you have a lustful heart but no courage. The heroine has hinted so clearly. What are you afraid of? 0......】
【Liu Peiqiang is a typical straight man!】
【Could it be a foreshadowing?】
【Speechless, this emotional scene is too long!】
【This part is really boring……】
【No, I think it's okay. The male and female protagonists must have some interaction. It depends on the proportion in the follow-up.】
【That’s right, what’s the point of having planes and cannons all the way?】
……
Liu Peiqiang:
I'm getting ready to get off the plane. It's not my shift today. I sneaked up here.
As a result, before I could get off, the cabin door suddenly closed. what's the situation?
An alarm sounded in the cabin: the car was about to lift off.
I looked out the window through the tempered glass and saw that all the elevator cabins at Station 1 and Station 2 were taking off collectively.
Some even landed halfway, suddenly slowed down, and then took off together!
What happened?
Did something happen to the space station?
I'm not the only one surprised.
The astronauts in the entire cabin were puzzled.
……
Guest room.
Nolan pointed at the screen:"It seems that a crisis is about to appear."
Tanaka Yoshiki:"Actually, I think the transition of this plot is quite smooth."
Live broadcast room.
Netizens’ hearts tightened
【Finally getting to the topic!】
【Isn't it an attack on the space elevator?】
【Definitely is!】
【Who would do this?】
【Still need to ask, Digital Life Organization】
【I don’t know if the road god will be directly included in the storyboard. If it can be drawn, it will be amazing!】
【You can look forward to it!】
……
Liu Peiqiang:
The countdown begins in the cabin and is about to take off.
"Please, I'm not wearing anti-German clothing!"
Fortunately, Duoduo helped me find an emergency backup anti-German suit.
BigColorful.
Like the groom's official.
I suddenly like this color!
Duoduo helped me fasten the safety buckle herself.
Seeing how nervous he was about me, I suddenly felt very proud!
She still likes me.
Actions and eyes don’t deceive
……
【Please, brother, the crisis is here, why don’t you leave your love interest here?】
【You have completely thrown away your master Zhang Peng’s warning, right?】
【Just speechless!】
……
With getting rid of the first stage of overweight.
We all removed our oxygen masks.
The control room is calling the main station to ask what happened.
But there was still no response.
At this time, I saw three people in the main cabin, two men and one woman, suddenly pulling up the safety rack and taking off their anti-G-suits.
I stared at the woman and was surprised to find that her name was exactly the same as Duoduo's.
Not just that woman.
The other two men also have the same names as the other two reserve astronauts.
Just when we’re feeling weird!
An accident happened!
I don’t know what those three people did.
The main cabin goes into emergency immobilization mode.
In this mode, the astronaut will be fixed in the seat at multiple angles.
It was originally designed to deal with emergencies such as storm currents.
Unexpectedly, it has now become a shackles binding the astronauts.
There was even a buddy who just got up to get something.
After the mode was turned on, the safety frame clamped his legs.
It hurt so much that he yelled
"Hey, my foot is stuck!"
……
【puff! 5.2 paragraph made me laugh】
【Kajiao's Bizarre Adventure!】
……
After that, the three of them walked straight to our cabin.
Come and snatch the nameplates of the three astronauts who were impersonated.
An astronaut's nameplate serves many purposes.
Such as entering the Ark space station!
……
Jury room.
Zhang Zhaozhong's pupils shrank:"The target is the Ark?"
Han Rendong:"The possibility is very high!"
Tanaka:"The intensity of the plot has skyrocketed!"
……
Liu Peiqiang:
One of the astronauts tried to resist.
One of them, a strong white man who looked like a fighting champion, knocked out several teeth with one punch!
I asked Duoduo not to resist.
He handed the nameplate to the other party, but Duoduo refused.
The female intruder pulled the nameplate off and snatched it away.
By the way, he snatched the flowers and threw them to me. He said with disdain:"Your confession is so shameless!"
Good guy, you can't bear it!
If it weren't for the safety frame tying me up.
I have to challenge her!
But the opportunity did come.
Before going out, the bald man punched the emergency escape button in an attempt to trap us in the passenger cabin.
Fortunately, after turning on this mode.
Several of us in the passenger cabin had our seats lifted.
Duoduo called the main station, but the signal was interrupted as expected.
Those in the main cabin attempted to resist.
He was beaten one by one by three people, and they were all killed.
I realized that these three people must have a huge conspiracy, and they must not sit still and wait for death.
But the hatch was locked and we couldn't get out at all. what to do?
Suddenly, I discovered that there was an EMP, which is an electromagnetic pulse transmitter, in the control room.
When this thing is activated, it can interfere with and paralyze all electronic equipment in the area.
The door will definitely open!
I say in my heart that there is no perfect way!
Pick up the EMP and take a look.
Depend on! out of battery!
……
Studio:"……"
PS:I’m still getting used to this writing method as I make up for yesterday’s chapter..
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