I asked you to write about Fishman, and you went crazy with your creations on the spot?

After all, he is a contestant who attracts attention by writing illegal plots!

How can I appreciate it myself! ?

Chen Sicheng coughed and felt that he needed to say a few words!

"Teacher Shuping, I think Lu Chen’s description of clan culture is too superficial!

Clan culture has a long history, depth, content, and weight!

But have you noticed it?

From beginning to end, Lu Chen only emphasized the concept of clan culture, and always emphasized the profound influence of clan culture on Lin Yaodong.

But he never mentioned the background of the Lin family, some family training, etc.

Don’t you think it’s too superficial to write like this?"

As soon as Chen Sicheng said this, the three judges all looked at him.

They looked at him with slightly strange eyes.

"Teacher Chen, it is a good thing to have high requirements, but is it unreasonable to have too high requirements? With only three hours of creative time, it is not reasonable in itself to want to cover everything, right?

Besides, Lu Chen only needed to introduce the concept of clan now.

If I have time later, I can add content to it. It’s totally timely. Shu

Ping retorted.

With only three hours of creative time, it is very cramped to create a story.

What else do you expect to be impeccable?

Shu Ping just can't tell it in person. If you are given three hours, what story can you create? ?

Maybe it’s not possible that Lu Chen’s current story is so precise.

When Chen Sicheng heard this, he was stunned for a moment, then paused, and said with a smile:"That’s right, after all, time is limited, as long as you can come up with a concept."

Seeing that Chen Sicheng didn't have hard steel, his attitude was pretty good.

Shu Ping also gave him a step up

"But what you said, Mr. Chen, makes sense. Regarding clan culture, if there is a chance to write a script in the future, Lu Chen really needs to think about it and add some content to it to make it as full as possible."

Chen Sicheng nodded.

When Liu Heping and Yan Gelin heard this, they both nodded slightly, which was a response to their"argument". Their eyes turned to the big screen again... in the room.

When Lu Chen wrote this, he stopped again. I started writing.

I stood in front of the whiteboard and thought quietly for a while. Lu Chen felt that it was necessary to highlight the plot in the ancestral hall. After all, Lin Yaodong’s ultimate goal is not only to lead Tazhai. In the conversation with Zhao Jialiang on the rooftop A paragraph. Lin Yaodong clearly stated that his highest personal ideal is to repair the most luxurious, largest and most gorgeous Lin family ancestral hall. It can be said that for this goal, Lin Yaodong has been preparing for at least ten years! Just before the plan was implemented! Tazhai Poison The village was destroyed! Presumably, this has become Lin Yaodong's lifelong regret. In the TV series, Lin's ancestral hall is not only an important filming location. In the series, there are also many scenes of Lin Yaodong quietly looking up at the ancestral hall... So... Lu Chen felt that he needed to focus on the ancestral hall section. Explain the ancestral hall section clearly and fully render it. It would also be of great benefit to the audience to understand the Lin family. It just so happened that there was a section about the Lin ancestral hall in the original play. A very detailed description... Thinking of this, Lu Chen secretly took a breath and continued writing:

"If we talk about leading Tazhai to rise, this is Lin Yaodong's spiritual goal!

Then, building the small ancestral hall of Benfang and repairing the large ancestral hall of the Lin family are Lin Yaodong's material goals.

It is not difficult for Lin Yaodong to build a small temple in his house.

As a member of the family, as long as you have money, you can repair it anytime you want!

But repairing the Lin Family Shrine is not that easy!

It must be done by someone with high moral standing and a well-off family background.

Lin Yaodong did not have these two points based on his strength at the time.

Therefore, repairing the temple has become an ambitious goal that Lin Yaodong has buried in his heart after he gradually became prosperous!

(Here, I feel it is necessary for me to arrange a background history for the ancestors of the Lin family to highlight the heritage of the Lin family and the historical and cultural background of Tazhai Village.）"

Lu Chen specially marked it with brackets.

First, it is to show your creative process and thinking direction!

Ensure on-site creation is more"authentic"!

Secondly, Lu Chen also had to lay the groundwork for the subsequent introduction of the Lin family tree.

Lu Chen held the pen and paced back and forth in the room.

Jury room.

I saw Lu Chen write this paragraph.

Yan Gelin laughed on the spot and said:"It really means that Cao Cao has arrived. We just discussed that the concept of clan is not clear. Lu Chen planned to add story content to the Lin family."

Shu Ping also immediately turned to look at Chen Sicheng and said with a smile:" Teacher Chen, it seems that you raised the question a step early. Lu Chen has obviously already considered the problem you have in mind." Chen Sicheng's smile was a little stiff, saying it was not true, and it was not true even if he didn't say it.

I could only force myself to smile twice and excuse myself.

I thought: What a ghost. I just asked a question and Lu Chen already considered it?

…………

Lu Chen was in the room, pacing back and forth for more than a dozen times.

Stopped suddenly.

There was a look of surprise between his eyebrows.

Then, I hurried to the whiteboard and wrote a paragraph.

An answer so soon?

The judges and netizens all looked intently, wondering what Lu Chen would write.

All I saw were lines of text as follows:

"According to the ancestral genealogy, in the fourth year of Jiatai in the Southern Song Dynasty, Shi Yinggong moved here from Anxi, Fujian, purchased acres of land, built a thatched cottage, and settled down here.

Later, when his children became prosperous, they converted the original hut into an ancestral hall. This was the first time in history that a Lin family ancestral hall was built.

Later, during the Jiaqing period of Qianlong, thanks to the development of the sugar industry and the prosperity of Jiazi Port, the Lin clan renovated the Lin clan ancestral hall for the second time.

During the Republic of China, war broke out and gangsters became popular, which allowed the clan power to maintain local peace to grow stronger! The strength of the Lin family once reached its peak. The renovated Lin's Ancestral Hall is also majestic and magnificent."

?Wow!

Saw this description.

Liu Heping and Shu Ping all felt a thump in their hearts!

Rao is a giant of historical drama like Liu Heping!

When I saw this description, I felt my eyes light up, and my eyes were gleaming!

After Shuping, Yan Gelin couldn't help nodding and praising him.

"This description is powerful and profound! Very well written!"

"Spanning three periods of history, the writing style is fresh and concise. I didn’t expect Lu Chen to have the potential to write a historical drama. Teacher Liu, what do you think? Yan

Gelin looked at Liu Heping.

The latter smiled slightly, nodded and said:"This background is well added, echoing the two themes of clan culture and ancestral hall culture. It has depth, history, and breadth. It can be done on the spot. It can be like this." The performance is worthy of recognition!"

Seeing that the three judges all gave high praises.

Chen Sicheng's face turned even redder.

But there was only one word in his heart: Damn!

I didn't expect No. 48 to really have a trick!

He secretly read the paragraph again.

He found...

If I were to write this paragraph by myself, I’m afraid I wouldn’t be able to write it well.……

…………

The judging panel is still like this.

The live broadcast room is naturally even more explosive!

【Good guy, I didn’t expect that the ancestors of the Lin family can be traced back to the Southern Song Dynasty! This description is so touching!】

【Is this the strength of being number one in the divisional competition? Awesome! Breaking sound!】

【Based on this description alone, No. 48 is enough to become a god! Advance to the next round!】

【Unexpectedly, during the Republic of China, the ancestors of the Lin family were still local sects, and they could actually ensure peace for one side! Amazing!】

【With such a historical background, it’s no wonder that the Tazhai clan culture is so rich.】

【With this background, I can understand more and more that Lin Yaodong is going to lead Tazhai to rise. This is not a rise, this is clearly a revival!】

【Doing illegal things just to repair the ancestral hall. I thought this paragraph was too bloody before, but looking at it now, I'm just being shallow!】

【Brother Dong is so down to earth! A person who only wants to lead his people to rise and build ancestral temples, what bad intentions can he have? (The dog head saves his life)】

【Suddenly I felt that Lin Yaodong was so cute! Working hard to earn money is to get the qualification to repair Lin's ancestral hall! No. 48 is awesome! Was this plot really thought up on the spot? Niubi exploded!】

【This plot is really awesome! It makes people’s scalp numb!】

【Looking forward to it, and looking forward to the next plot even more!!!!! ]

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