Zongman: Why are all your comics full of knives?

Time passes, and the scenery outside the window also turns from white to black.

After dinner, the blank document created during the day was already densely filled with words.

However, the main story has not yet begun.

It's not that Nangong Mu is fishing halfway.

It's the design of the character and the backstory, as well as the construction of several key lines.

There are also the most important ones in the whole story, 13 light jade before and after all the plots!

Because the background of the script is based on the animated story.

As for why not from a gaming point of view...... Ahem, the workload is too much, just thinking about it, Nangong Mu has a feeling of numbness in the scalp!

Each line has a very complete story, and as a player, you have to experience more than 100 hours to achieve full achievement clearance!

The length of the experience is so exaggerated, and you can imagine that when it comes to developing as a game, the amount of work is really ridiculous.

Even if he could copy it, Nangong Mu didn't want to do it.

After all, he doesn't have a full team at his disposal.

A small game like "The Witch's House" doesn't take much effort to do on a single person.

And a word game like CLANNAD, that's a headache!

Back to the point.

If you start from the game, there will be 14 light jade!

However, one of the 14 Lite Jade will be consumed by Fengzi's Wish, triggering the "Radiant Disappearance Event".

If this event is triggered, 7 Lite Jade will open the Afterstory.

If you don't experience the "Wish of the Wind Child", you must start the rest of the story with 8 light jades.

The animation takes into account the length, so even if it doesn't experience the "Wish of the Wind", it still only takes 7 light jade to open the follow-up chapter.

And the stories involved in these 13 light jades are the key to the whole animation!

Similarly, only by collecting these 13 light jades can the final true ending be achieved.

At the end of the story.

The destruction of the fantasy world, it is precisely because of the existence of these 13 light jades that it will cause time to go back in time, back to the day when Furukawa Nagisa gave birth 5 years ago.

Because Guangyu has replaced Furukawa Nagisa, there are no more difficult births and deaths during childbirth on this line.

"Whew. "

Looking at the words in front of him that had been sorted out for a day, Nangong Mu sighed lightly.

"I didn't expect this thing to be so difficult to write. "

It's like a human design.

This kind of thing is not clearly expressed in words, but only through the side in the plot.

Nangong Mu had to recall the plot over and over again, and depict it in the form of words in his own words.

Take the protagonist Tomoya Okazaki as an example.

Lost his mother at a young age, and his father was also devastated by the death of his mother, and since then he has become unmotivated and indifferent to the protagonist as a son.

This is probably the thought that many people have after watching "CLANNAD".

In fact, this generalization is very one-sided.

The other party is not indifferent to the protagonist, on the contrary, after the death of the protagonist's mother, the protagonist becomes the only belief that the other party has to live.

It's just that he raised Tomoya Okazaki alone, and after Tomoya has the ability to live independently, he will look so unbearable when he loses his goal of survival.

In "CLANNADafterstory", the story of the other party is explained in detail.

If you define it early because of the previous part, it is easy to deviate.

I had to do a lot of comparisons to complete all the characters!

Even some details that only show from the side,

This part must be thought through independent thinking before it can be written.

Under such conditions, Nangong Mu can still have such a fast speed, which shows his efforts.

As for whether this work can pass the primary election, Nangong Mu has no worries!

AFTER ALL, THIS IS THE STORY OF WRITING CLANNAD, READING LIFE!

Although this statement is a bit exaggerated, being given such praise is enough to show the merits of this work! (If you read a violent novel, go to Feilu Novel Network!)

"That's all for today. "

Although I didn't feel sleepy for the time being, the time was already past 11 o'clock.

A rare holiday, there is no need to work so hard, anyway, the work is not something that can be done in a day, just take your time.

In the blink of an eye, another 10 days passed.

The second volume of "Chopping Sister" is also on sale.

In the new volume, the protagonist begins to participate in a new mission with the night attack, and although there is a certain danger in the process, it is natural that he will be safe in the end.

And the protagonist has also grown a certain amount from the events.

The only thing that surprised fans was that the protagonist's partner changed and became Hill.

Isn't the red pupil the main character?

The crowd couldn't help but have such thoughts, and then they denied it.

After all, the name of this comic is "Crimson Pupil", who could it be if it's not a red pupil?

But the new characters are also pretty good-looking, so let's ignore this little detail.

The naïve reader obviously can't imagine that this is Nangong Mu preparing to knife them!

"Ahhh

"The old thief is now drawing "Three Questions of Doom" and this one, I advise you to speed up a little! Don't be ignorant!!"

"'Do you think one volume a month is too much for buddies to consume?Hurry up and update!!"

Looking at the pile of complaints in the dynamic, Nangong Mu couldn't help but smile.

"Hopefully you'll be able to say the same thing next month. "

Although he is going to give readers a knife, Nangong Mu does not plan to draw the next volume according to the original work.

The most criticized thing about "Cutting Sister" is that it is like a person who stabs for the sake of a knifeman.

At the beginning, the appearance of the secret attack was full of courage,

It gives people the feeling that the combat power of these characters must be very strong and cheating.

The result was also the emperor's envoy, but in the case of two to one, he was killed by a girl from the imperial capital garrison who appeared casually!

How to say this plot, the more I think about it, the more outrageous I feel.

Of course.

It seems outrageous, and the main thing is that there is not enough foreshadowing.

It's like One Piece.

From the beginning of the appearance to the later stage, Karp has always been super high, but the result is that he lost so easily, as long as he has a little brain, he will feel uncomfortable!

When he was injured by Hiryu's sneak attack and defeated by Kuzan, this far-fetched reason is not enough to convince people!

If this scene is replaced by being besieged by the entire Blackbeard team, and in the case of flying several guys, he will eventually lose the enemy, I don't think any fans will find it problematic!

After all, no matter how powerful Karp is, there is only one person.

Being besieged by a man who had one of the original three major generals, as well as many sea thieves, and Blackbeard, who was the fourth emperor, was not defeated by a matter of course?

This is the rationality of logic.

In the same way, if Seleuc were to be filled with more background information, then it would be very reasonable to kill Ciel at a heavy cost in the case of one or two!

And for a creator, filling in the background and letting a character give the reader has already done this, isn't it normal for the character to be super strong? This feeling can be said to be a basic operation.

As for why the original author thinks that as long as he explains it like this, it will be fine... This kind of thing is probably only known to the author himself.

It's like no one can understand why Oda went to draw the late stage of One Piece like he is now.