Zongman: This is the everyday world, right?
Chapter 72
After school, Kora Mu and Hikiya Hachiman came to the ministry as well.
After opening the door of the classroom, I saw Xue Nai sleeping with the back of her hand on her forehead and her elbow resting on the desk.
However, as soon as he heard the sound of the door opening, he instantly woke up and straightened up again to read.
"The timber seat hasn't come here yet, so you can continue to rest first."
Gongliangmu walked to her side and saw that she also had some dark circles under her eyes, and asked her to squint for a while.
Xue Nai didn't refute under the snow, this time using her arm as a pillow.
"Before your best friend arrives, you should hurry up and get some sleep."
Gongliang Mu looked back and saw that Hachiman looked listless, and gave the same idea.
"Okay, wake me up when you need me"
After finishing speaking, he also went straight down.
"Hello, Xiao Mu"
"Eh, did Xiaoxue and Ah Qi stay up late last night?"
"Dango, you didn't read the manuscript after you took it back yesterday."
"Ah...... This...... I forgot."
Yui Hihama compares a scissor hand and puts on a cute expression in an attempt to get through the cuteness.
"I can't stand you. Forget it, I don't think you can make any constructive suggestions anyway. "
"What, Xiao Mu, are you looking down on me?"
Yubihama asked angrily as he pouted, intending to quietly reach his hand to his lower back.
How could Gongliangmu still fall for her, he just grabbed her wrist and didn't let her continue to move. Yubihama tried to shake him off, and the two of them were just so close to each other writhing around.
The reason why the word twist is used is because it is the intuitive feeling of Fumino Furuhashi when he opened the door and saw that picture.
"Am I not at the right time?"
"No, no, no, I didn't see anything"
Fumino Furuhashi covered her eyes with her palms, but the gap between her fingers was so large that she completely exposed most of her eyes.
Gongliang Mu let go of his hand, and Danzi immediately reached back with his hand, and then hid behind Furuhashi Fumino.
"Wen Nai, Xiao Mu, he bullied me"
"The dango wanted to pinch my back waist, but I restrained it"
Gongliangmu felt that it was still necessary to explain clearly.
Of course, Fumino Furuhashi knew that they were joking, so he stopped the two of them as a peacemaker.
As soon as the three of them returned to their respective seats, the door was opened again, and Yoshiki walked straight in, pulled up a chair and sat down.
"Okay, let's hear what you think."
Under the snow, Yukino had already sat up, ready to speak. Gongliangmu seemed to have heard the wailing voice of the timber seat.
"I'm sorry, but I don't know much about this kind of thing."
"It doesn't matter, I was just trying to hear the opinions of mortals, so you let go"
At this time, the timber seat did not realize the seriousness of the problem.
"Is it?"
Under the snow, Xue Nai paused for a second and began to execute.
"It's boring, reading has become a kind of torture, boring beyond my imagination"
The timber seat covers the heart, and the action is extremely exaggerated.
"Can you tell me what is boring for reference?"
"First of all, the grammar is messy, why do you always use inverted sentences, and you can't tell the difference?
"This is because an approachable article makes the reader feel more relatable......"
"Can you please write the minimum text before talking about this?"
"In addition, there are too many misuses of superscripts, and ability can't be read as power at all......
The snow is still singing, but unfortunately the blood bar of the wood seat has bottomed out.
After listening to so many questions listed under the snow, and then looking at the timber seat that was already kneeling on the ground at this time, Gongliangmu was a little skeptical that he could meet his requirements.
"That's enough, it's not good to say it all at once."
Seeing his friend's miserable appearance, the big teacher interrupted the speech under the snow.
"I haven't said enough yet, so let's forget it"
"Then it's Yubihama's turn next."
Tuanzi was originally drowsy when he heard it, or he was drowsy after reading a few pages temporarily, and when he heard Xue Nai shouting to himself, he was suddenly excited.
"That...... You know a lot of strange words."
"Ah......h
The timber seat wailed.
"It's the turn of Aqi"
"Hachiman, you must be able to understand me, right?"
"Tell me, which work you copied" (read the violent novel, go to the Feilu Novel Network!)
The timber seat wailed as he rolled on the ground.
"It's time for you"
The timber seat looked at Gongliang Mu with hope.
"Gongliang-san, you can understand me, right?"
Gongliang Mu coughed a few times, and took out the manuscript of the wood seat in his schoolbag.
"If you're asking me what you think of the second narrative in your novel, then I can tell you unequivocally that it's boring, there is no audience, and it's just a waste of time to write again, so it's better to give up writing as soon as possible."
"Ah......h
The timber seat fell to his knees again.
"But aside from this way of writing, you can still see your strengths in some details, like ...... here"
Gongliang Mu pointed to the manuscript, and then began to preach to the timber seat, and the other party basically only nodded for the next twenty minutes or so, but did not give up on himself.
"I don't seem to need me anymore."
Fumino Furuhashi took out the manuscript from his bag and handed it to Yukishimo.
"yes, you don't need us at all."
Yubihama saw that Gongliang Mu was still talking at this time, and simply stopped looking at the hypnotic paper, and also folded it on top of the paper in front of Xue Nai.
"Sure enough, you still have to be fair, and it seems that the timber seat should not give up writing."
Hikiya Hachiman was relieved to see that this friend was able to get the guidance of Mizuki-sensei.
"One of your big problems now is that you don't know how to tell a story, and looking at the plot here and here, it's completely a conflict, and the settings are all eaten up by you. "
Gongliangmu took out a few more A4s full of text from his schoolbag, and several other people were curious about what this was.
"This is a synopsis of my new work that will be released next week, and now I am giving you a synopsis of the first chapter, according to the advice I just gave you, as well as the writing tips and precautions here, I hope you will not disappoint me next time you bring the manuscript over. "
Gongliangmu dared to take out unreleased works at this time, but it was not brainless to trust him. Mainly because he has already taken pictures for evidence.
Although the plot of the first chapter does not reveal much information, if Timakiza dares to plagiarize his ideas, he does not mind using mental mastery to teach him a profound lesson.
At least you can control him to confess his sins, or at worst drive him crazy, and let him commit suicide to see God, he is not a virgin, he can only say that the ability to eat bees and pray is too good to use, and he can do things without leaving a trace.
"My friend Gongliang, have you also contributed to it?"
"Yes, my pen name is Mizuki, and the novels I write are probably quite famous."
"Ah, it turns out that you are the author of the Catalogue of Forbidden Books of Magic, Mizuki-sensei, and I like your novels very much. "
In fact, after reading the magic ban, he also added the setting of a superpower to himself for a while.,He imagined himself as the eighth superpower person in the school city.,Sent to the general martial arts high to carry out secret missions.。
"Oh, if you've read it, you should know that I have high requirements for writing."
"I will definitely digest these as soon as possible during this time, and then write them out to your satisfaction"
"Then it's best to finish it before the weekend, my new work will be released by the weekend"
"Isn't the manuscript in my hand now top secret?"
Timber Sawa trembled his hands, as if he had obtained something valuable and fragile.
"I hope you don't reveal it to anyone else, or you'll bear my wrath. "
Gong Liangmu's eyes were sharp at this time, and he leaned near his ear to whisper.
"Trust me, you can't take it"
"My friend Gongliang, don't worry, even if you fight for your life, you will definitely protect the truth of this world"
Gongliangmu heard that he was still speaking in the second secondary school, and he didn't know if he understood his words, but the words had come to this point, and it was useless to say more.
"Okay, go back, and hope to see your progress in the next meeting. "
Timber Za excitedly packed up his things, and when he was about to walk out the door, he turned around and bowed 90 degrees to everyone in the Ministry of Serving.
"Thank you for the help of the Ministry of Service in the past two days, and General Wu Jianhao will come back. "
After finishing speaking, he turned around and ran out, and he couldn't see that this fat body was still quite agile when he moved.
"So this commission really didn't come in handy for me"
Fumino Furuhashi regrets that he didn't help much this time.
"It's okay, there will be a chance".
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